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vtrantien
Posts: 621
Hồ Chí Minh City, Pomorskie, Vietnam


(Taken by #2704148)

Before

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8102/8641883742_a61b5f4da4_c.jpg


After

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8259/8639971836_fdc8c62fc2_c.jpg
Apr 11 13 05:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,486
Lodi, California, US


I think all the changes are positives, with the exception of her hair.
I prefer most of the look of it in the original.
Apr 11 13 06:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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NickWatson
Posts: 59
London, England, United Kingdom


over retouched, she looks bruised under her cheekbone. also learn to look at the image as a whole, i find the creases in the curtains immediately distracting before i even get to the girl. try and be more subtle with dnb, less contouring and work on overall distractions first and then colour. hope this helps.
May 02 13 06:52 am  Link  Quote 
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