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ChrisWalburnPhotography
Posts: 40
Hampton, Virginia, US


I LOVE this pic but I don't know what it is missing. I feel it is missing that pop or wow factor to push it over the edge.

https://sphotos-b.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos- … 0857_n.jpg
Apr 16 13 02:37 pm  Link  Quote 
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A-M-P
Posts: 17,910
Orlando, Florida, US


dodge and burn the lips to make them pop and fix the lip line. Also some contrast on the clothes would help. The eye looks very weird one is completely blown out and the other looks scary. I don't know the background lacks dimension she looks pasted there.
Apr 16 13 02:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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ChrisWalburnPhotography
Posts: 40
Hampton, Virginia, US


How does this look to separate her from the background and how would you suggest I do so if you were to do it.
http://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-p … 5864_n.jpg
Apr 16 13 03:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peano
Posts: 4,106
Lynchburg, Virginia, US


A few thoughts that came to mind:

- stick with the blue theme, a cooling filter on the hair, a little more blue in the skin tones and in the red of the lips

- define the lips and add a little gloss

- background light low, just above the shoulders, and a touch of lightening around the top of the hair (on the hair) to separate that from the background

- darken the camera-left eye so it isn't quite so different from the other eye (or lighten the camera-right eye)

http://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af171/retouch46/Forums/bluegirl_zpsed33de97.gif

http://i1005.photobucket.com/albums/af171/retouch46/Forums/bluegirl_zps84836cab.jpg
Apr 16 13 03:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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ChrisWalburnPhotography
Posts: 40
Hampton, Virginia, US


How did you get the lips to look more cut out.
I had tried my hand at the pic again and got this.
http://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a … 2138_n.jpg
Apr 16 13 04:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Peano
Posts: 4,106
Lynchburg, Virginia, US


ChrisWalburnPhotography wrote:
How did you get the lips to look more cut out.

Use the pen tool to create a mask.

Apr 16 13 04:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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