I'm looking at my portfolios, and I need to redo at least half of each. Unfortunately, I'm not sure what to keep and what to toss, and what to add. Any serious advice would be very welcome, as I'm going to start looking for portfolio work this week.
Lose this one....it's evident you have beautiful body movement...and, that can't be taught. You mission (if you chose to accept it), is to always make sure you use an excellent photographer. You curves and sleekness should make you a very likeable subject for many photographers. Most of your images are quite good, but, this one.....not necessary at all. Best of luck....and, stay focused!
There are many I would consider cutting but I'm not sure this would help you. You appear to be trying to appear to different markets. Perhaps if you categorize things in folders on your computer, which could take quite some time it will give you a stronger idea of what shots you need, etc. Then, of course, if you put folders up like glamour, or bondage, etc. you could easily determine if had enough of each interest.
I do work in multiple genres, although BDSM/Fetish and Art Nude are definitely my two strongest. I'm currently in a market that looks for the more mainstream glamour and glamour nude models, and need to start putting some of that type of work into my portfolio to show a range of ability.