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Lillian Faith
Posts: 292
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Hey y'all!

I did a fun swimsuit shoot today and I got some pics back already. smile

I tried lots more expressions. How did I do?
Apr 23 13 09:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


cute set, but they look like candids.
Apr 23 13 09:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,623
New York, New York, US


A little better, keep at it, it takes time.
Apr 23 13 09:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lillian Faith
Posts: 292
Atlanta, Georgia, US


It's something different for my port. I didn't have happy stuff in there lol.
Apr 23 13 09:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SKITA Studios
Posts: 1,563
Boston, Massachusetts, US


This works:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/5177581ab4dad_m.jpg


This didn't because you're mixing too much of a fashion pose w/ a commercial smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg

Nice smile, so you do have a nice commerial look.
Definitely keep experimenting w/ expressions...
Apr 24 13 07:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Garry k
Posts: 26,736
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


SKITA Studios wrote:
This didn't because you're mixing too much of a fashion pose w/ a commercial smile:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg

Nice smile, so you do have a nice commerial look.
Definitely keep experimenting w/ expressions...

I totally disagree . I think it is a very good picture

Apr 24 13 07:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AJScalzitti
Posts: 12,209
Atlanta, Georgia, US


I think you showed more, good.  Some are a more commercial, and that could be exactly what your agency wants for you.

Overall I am not a big fan of the images, they look a lot like snapshots and are not composed or cropped well.
Apr 24 13 07:29 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Byron Chua
Posts: 231
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130423/20/517757ed3e43b_m.jpg
smile
Apr 24 13 09:41 am  Link  Quote 
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