Um, OMG. That blue gown pic I just listed is GORGEOUS. I love it! :-D
I say to take out the following:
You don't need it. If I were you, I'd keep it either on your profile page, if you have the ability to do that, or in a "tear sheets" page or album on your website. (If you don't have a website, or at least a FB fan page, I recommend getting one.) Anyway, that's what I do with my tears. It makes the portfolio look less cluttered.
Very cliche. I'd have loved to see a high-fashion black and white with those wings, though, if you still have access to them.
I don't like them.
I hope I helped! :-D For what it's worth, I'd LOOOOVE to see some really high-key, Vogue-ish shots of you.