What is the purpose of the photo?
Pose wise would prefer to see a long beautiful neck, how ever your shoulder is up so it is shortening its appearance. Also photos seem to work out best when elbows are not pointed at camera
When you show me your elbow and that much left arm, would really like to see your hand
Will also say the photo treatment might work best in a photographer’s portfolio, because when I am looking at a models portfolio I want to see what she looks like
Where does it belong, in your personal favorites?
Wish you well