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Photographer
KMK photography
Posts: 10
Virginia Beach, Virginia, US


Hi all,
I am hoping to get some constructive feedback on some recent images that I have taken, thanks!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/17/5175dc9b1ffa9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/17/5175dc63ba79d_m.jpg
Apr 24 13 07:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,910
Lansing, Michigan, US


Model has 1 facial expression in all shots and is looking into camera in all shots.

P.S. I hate collages.
Apr 24 13 05:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Swank Photography
Posts: 18,967
Key West, Florida, US


The Effective Image wrote:
Model has 1 facial expression in all shots and is looking into camera in all shots.

P.S. I hate collages.

I 100% agree^

All have same dull, lifeless expression.

I have never been a fan of collages.

Apr 24 13 05:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Scarlett de la Calle
Posts: 414
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia


agree with the above also you seem to favour the look of putting one hand up and grabbing your clothing. I would practice expressions and poses in front of the mirror so you look a bit more lively in front of the camera.

Do you do yoga or dance classes? That can help too!
Apr 24 13 05:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,290
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/17/5175dc9b1ffa9_m.jpg

1st image
Busy Oriental background
Model should have more space in front of her
[Move her to photo right]
Right hand is a fist

2nd image
Green tree branch is a distraction
Raise camera closer to eye level
Catch lights look like tiny dots
[Looks like on camera flash]

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/17/5175dc63ba79d_m.jpg

1st image
Model looks like she is sneering
Raise the camera

2nd
Model too centered
Model is such a small element in photo

3rd
Too much wall

Prefer one photo per slot

Over all models poses are not as strong as they could be

Wish you well
Apr 24 13 06:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
KMK photography
Posts: 10
Virginia Beach, Virginia, US


Thanks for the feedback lee!
Apr 25 13 02:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,696
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Not terrible but these look like boring senior photos
Apr 25 13 05:14 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Edge of the Moon
Posts: 428
New York, New York, US


I would say to break up the images from the collage format too.
Too many images with the same expression.  Pick fewer.
Apr 25 13 05:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
KMK photography
Posts: 10
Virginia Beach, Virginia, US


Thanks for the additional feedback all!
Apr 25 13 11:35 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,012
Champaign, Illinois, US


The Effective Image wrote:
Model has 1 facial expression in all shots and is looking into camera in all shots.

P.S. I hate collages.

Ditto

Apr 25 13 10:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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