Hey! I'm not sure if you're willing to do one more but I'd love some critique Jun 08 13 11:32 am Link Can you help me choose my strongest photos and need a book/comp card for NY open calls next week? you're welcome to go through all the images, or just look in 'portfolio' folder for my top favorites see link: http://www.flickr.com/photos/22517982@N … 916011207/ thank you so much for any input, your favorites will help me narrow them down! Jun 08 13 01:15 pm Link I would love to hear from you. Jun 08 13 01:53 pm Link yes, please Jun 10 13 01:25 pm Link Please do let me know Jun 10 13 07:54 pm Link Sure! Jun 11 13 10:18 am Link Would like to know Jun 12 13 06:44 am Link Please and thank you!! Jun 12 13 07:59 am Link Jun 12 13 01:07 pm Link I'm really green with models but give me best advice. Jun 12 13 01:44 pm Link Ok! Jun 13 13 12:03 am Link would appreciate it.... Jun 13 13 05:37 pm Link I'm a newbie I'm sure can use it. Thank You! Jun 13 13 06:26 pm Link I would love to hear your opinion! Jun 14 13 04:09 pm Link Yes, would appreciate you taking a look at a new MMer's portfolio. Thanks. BH Jun 16 13 11:41 am Link Yess, please! Jun 17 13 06:44 am Link Since I'm new to the MM world I would be curious to hear what you have to say. Many thanks. BH Jun 17 13 08:09 am Link Billy Hughes wrote: Billy, welcome to MM. I hope you stick around. Jun 19 13 04:49 pm Link Malinaa wrote: Hey Malinaa, you've got a wonderful, sensual look. Some of the shots in your port really bring that out. I love this head shot: Jun 19 13 04:53 pm Link W I L L O W wrote: Willow, please come to Chicago, I would love to do a shoot with you! Jun 19 13 04:58 pm Link What about my port? Jun 20 13 10:50 am Link what do I need to toss out? Jun 20 13 11:23 pm Link So, tell me. I would love to know your thoughts. Thanks in advance Jun 27 13 12:13 pm Link If your still critiquing, would love to hear from you Jun 27 13 10:05 pm Link OoooooK... Jun 27 13 10:09 pm Link Ron, If you're still game, I've got only semi-thick skin. ;-) Let 'er rip. Ed. Note - I've been shooting 2 1/2 years and the later stuff uploaded is better than the earlier stuff. Poses were all mine, so good bad or in between that falls on me, so if they missed it's on me. Thanks in advance, Gary Jun 27 13 10:20 pm Link If you are still going, I'm quite thick skinned, and always find fresh eyes useful. Jun 27 13 11:07 pm Link How is my port for a beginner Jun 28 13 12:02 pm Link Hi I would really like a critique of my port. Especially what kind of photos I should add. Thanks Molly Jul 12 13 07:43 pm Link Me please!! Jul 13 13 10:57 am Link Would be great to receive some constructive feedback on my port. Photography is mostly a hobby for me, but I take it seriously and try to constantly improve. Jul 13 13 11:21 am Link Sure, why the heck not. Jul 13 13 11:27 am Link Paige Thomley wrote: Hi Paige. We're practically neighbors. Jul 14 13 11:36 am Link Kurly Smith wrote: Kurly, not a lot to say here. Looks like you've worked with three photographers. No offense to jetude or Hollingsworth, but they're really not helping you. You have a really look, but a great photographer (along with stylist/mua/hair) will transform you to a whole 'nother level. You go in that direction with your shots from Pura-Vida. Jul 14 13 11:43 am Link Molly Connolly wrote: Hi Molly, you've only 7 pics in your port, so not a whole lot to talk about. Look at the first pic in your port, far left first row, shot by David Charles. Now go to 2nd row, 2nd pic, shot by Stephanie Anne. See how your facial structure changes between these two shoots. Really talented fashion photographers know how to bring out the most in your facial structure and help you look your best. But right now, you need to tackle more shoots. Get in as many TFP shoots as you can, and as you feel yourself getting comfortable, then start focusing in on better photographers. Good luck! Jul 14 13 11:57 am Link Massi wrote: Massi, you've got some interesting looks going on in your port. But your work with light, both natural light and studio strobes (or speedlights) need some fine-tuning. I think you do a really nice job of creating some scenes that are fitting for the concept of the shot. The parasol shot is very nice, just don't like how the bushes behind them with the blown highlights pulls your attention away from the models. Otherwise, very soft light on your models, creating a beautiful pastoral scene. Shot of the redhead on the scene, you've got to learn how to harness the light even in those conditions. Trying to save it in Photoshop doesn't usually work, and it didn't work here. Girl in long skirt/purple shirt, trash that shot immediately. She's under a tree with spotted direct sunlight coming down through the trees. The Great Gatsby shot is an example of what works. Trees shots look good, some of the others, not so. With your studio lighting, be careful with your hot spots. Really good studio lighting is like painting lighting onto your subject, whether you're going for a soft, feathered lighting, or harsh, dramatic lighting. Control it, make it do what you want. Jul 14 13 12:07 pm Link I'm sorry for those of you that I skipped, but I have no idea if you're still following this thread, and I put some time and thought into this, just don't want to waste it. Feel free to respond again, and I'll try to get it done more timely. Jul 14 13 12:14 pm Link Go for it. Jul 14 13 12:23 pm Link Ron McKinney wrote: Jul 14 13 12:25 pm Link Ron McKinney wrote: Thanks for the advice. I am trying to find those photographers! I would love to shoot with you if I ever get to Chicago . . . Who knows? Jul 14 13 02:18 pm Link |