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vivera1977
Posts: 70
Rumia, Pomorskie, Poland


original
http://obrazki.wapnet.pl/images/681IMG_3972_sss.jpg


frame
http://obrazki.wapnet.pl/images/532IMG_3972ma_e_Edit.jpg



my

http://obrazki.wapnet.pl/images/309IMG_397t2ma_e_Edit.jpg
Apr 24 13 01:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,480
Lodi, California, US


I think well done, but the eye work is a little heavy handed IMHO
Apr 24 13 04:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Liquid Lace Studios
Posts: 195
Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia


Motordrive Photography wrote:
I think well done, but the eye work is a little heavy handed IMHO

+1 ... the sclera are over whitened Imho

Jun 08 13 03:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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M Pandolfo Photography
Posts: 12,116
Tampa, Florida, US


Liquid Lace Studios wrote:
+1 ... the sclera are over whitened Imho

Lovely images but I have to agree with this. I'd scale back the opacity and that would be a keeper for sure. Well done.

Jun 08 13 03:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
LarrySparks Photography
Posts: 116
Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa


Thats a old photog trick that worked perfectly, so well done with the Posing technique. Too much on the eyes thought, but not bad at all smile
Aug 07 13 02:55 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Alyssa June Retouch
Posts: 159
Denver, Colorado, US


I like the eyebrows, the eyes are a bit too white.
Maybe sharpen the eyes a bit?

Other then that nice!
Aug 10 13 03:09 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


Aug 10 13 07:11 am  Link  Quote 
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