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Extrosy
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Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130419/13/5171b01a3597b.jpg

Thanks for any feedback

Eric
Apr 24 13 04:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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Swank Photography
Posts: 18,977
Key West, Florida, US


Extrosy wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130419/13/5171b01a3597b.jpg

Thanks for any feedback

Eric

Wow. What grabbed me first was the eyes! Great job!

Now while overall it looks a tad bit over photoshopped...in a sense it actually works...kinda like in a goth/ethereal manner...understand?

Not really a fan of the extreme blur towards the outer edges...but like I said the eyes grabbed me!

Apr 24 13 04:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Too much blurring and sharpening in post it seems, also looks like an amputee
Apr 24 13 04:14 pm  Link  Quote 
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B R U N E S C I
Posts: 25,319
Bath, England, United Kingdom


Black background is too black and it looks like somebody let a 12 year old girl loose with Photoshop sad

What's wrong with just taking a decent photo and using Photoshop to remove a few blemishes if necessary? Why the need to destroy it with hideous blur and oversharpening?



Just my $0.02

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Stefano
www.stefanobrunesci.com
Apr 24 13 04:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Extrosy
Posts: 656
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


The blur is from shooting at f/1.4 and 90mm
I did sharpen the eyes though.
Apr 24 13 04:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


I'm talking about the blur on her face.
Apr 24 13 07:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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Extrosy
Posts: 656
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


RachelReilly wrote:
I'm talking about the blur on her face.

Probably the IR mode 2 from Color Efex, it has that sort of Glamour Shots softness.

Apr 24 13 10:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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