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Images by MR
Posts: 7,671
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Going for that fashion look.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130416/19/516e09926ca96_m.jpg

Thanks ~ MR
Apr 24 13 09:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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DOUGLASFOTOS
Posts: 8,349
Los Angeles, California, US


Images by MR wrote:
Going for that fashion look.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130416/19/516e09926ca96_m.jpg

Thanks ~ MR

Hey that is a nice car in the background.....what kind is it?....Mazda? Honda? Ford?

And also nice Pawn Shop!!!

Apr 24 13 10:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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MoreLightPhotography
Posts: 21
Hanna, Indiana, US


As stated above. The background kills it for me.

Get closer open up to 2.8 or lower and blow that background away.
Apr 24 13 10:39 pm  Link  Quote 
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Trisha May Photography
Posts: 304
Colchester, Connecticut, US


Same opinion as the others, background is way too busy.
Apr 24 13 10:46 pm  Link  Quote 
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Charlie-CNP
Posts: 2,644
New York, New York, US


sorry, not there yet. keep shooting and try opening up to get rid of the background like others have mentioned. Also, from a composition stand point, try something other than center weighted images with your model directly in the center of the frame. It feels very snap shot like in this sense. Your model also looks a bit uneasy, maybe have her run, jump, skip, frolic..etc. before going into the pose. If she is having fun on the shoot, it will show in the image. good luck

edit:  also be careful with the term fashion. Most serious fashion work requires models with very specific stats/looks. This looks more like an attempt at portraiture or editorial at best.
Apr 24 13 10:48 pm  Link  Quote 
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E H
Posts: 645
Calgary, Alberta, Canada


It is way too much of the bad things and not enough of the good things required, is my personal thought.
  Look at fashion mags,,, see what/how and why things are done. Anyone could have taken this,,, problem is anyone will not be in the fashion mags...   
   Start looking then do your own twist those type shots. When you look them MAKE SURE you see what you are looking at,,,study eveything.....
Apr 24 13 10:50 pm  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 7,192
New York, New York, US


Yep, careful...calling something fashion around here is DANGEROUS!!!..........They will sick dogs on you and have you for breakfast! They have weapons too! I seen them! haha Run Forest run!
Apr 24 13 10:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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Images by MR
Posts: 7,671
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Thanks everyone for the feedback.
Apr 24 13 11:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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