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Kirsti allen
Posts: 4
Stroud, England, United Kingdom


Its been a months or so since I have jumped back in front of the camera and I was simply wondering how I was doing?  Esp as a former agency llama ( being told how to look and make up done pretty much for me)
So if you have 2 mins take a gander at my profile and let me know
Meny thanks
Kirsti xx
Apr 25 13 12:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
robert b mitchell
Posts: 1,054
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Well I definitely like your look, but some of your photos seem amateurish ( the photographer; not you) with the blowout of detail. They are standard shots that really do not garner alot of interest for an attractive lady like you. Its just an opinion....
Apr 25 13 12:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
J O H N A L L A N
Posts: 9,519
Santa Ana, California, US


You don't seem to necessarily be giving the camera your best angles. I have no idea, but if you were doing this when you were younger, you may have to find your angles again based on your more evolved facial structure.
Apr 25 13 12:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
KellenJordan
Posts: 25
San Diego, California, US


beautiful gal
Apr 25 13 01:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kirsti allen
Posts: 4
Stroud, England, United Kingdom


Thank you all for you comments and yes I see what you all mean
Thank you for taking the time to look xxx
Apr 25 13 01:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


You seem to be much more commercial than editorial.
Apr 25 13 07:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Meghan Hale wrote:
You seem to be much more commercial than editorial.

I agree.
Also start practicing on your posing and facial expressions!
And work with better photographers!!
Best of luck smile

Apr 25 13 09:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Perceptive Portraits
Posts: 227
North Salt Lake, Utah, US


Of all the images in the sequence, I'd keep this one:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130321/04/514af3c045e05_m.jpg

I also noticed your expression was almost identical in every shot. In this one you look particularly annoyed:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130409/03/5163f3f3dacbe_m.jpg

Even if that's what you were going for, the image doesn't add much to your portfolio. Do more shoots with moods like this:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130316/10/5144adeb1bdc5_m.jpg

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May 01 13 09:20 pm  Link  Quote 
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