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vivera1977
Posts: 71
Rumia, Pomorskie, Poland


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May 07 13 01:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,718
Lodi, California, US


I like the retouch, but the color and saturation go too far for me,
like the cheek bone contour, also highlights should have less
saturation, not more, hair can be neatened up a little.
May 07 13 05:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
robert b mitchell
Posts: 1,377
Surrey, British Columbia, Canada


I disagree with the above comment. I think there is far too much contouring on the cheeks and the hair is fine. So are the highlights. Love the shading on the browbone.
May 07 13 05:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Motordrive Photography
Posts: 2,718
Lodi, California, US


that is what I was saying, I should have said example/ rouge on cheeks over sat. at transition zone of highlight. Sorry for confusion.
May 07 13 06:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


look at difference in the skin it looks as if you ran a filter on it and made it look plastic. I prefer the look on the original over the retouch.
May 07 13 06:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
vivera1977
Posts: 71
Rumia, Pomorskie, Poland


Thank you very much
May 08 13 07:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
alicazkrajinky
Posts: 18
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland


i likethe hair, the color in the cheeks for me a bit to much and i would liquify the nose a bit. My opinion mate smile
May 08 13 12:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
LarrySparks Photography
Posts: 116
Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa


nice!! smile
Aug 07 13 03:11 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Alyssa June Retouch
Posts: 167
Denver, Colorado, US


Nice job the eye shadow, cheeks are a bit overdone for me.
I agree hair could use a little cleaning up - along the forehead and maybe turn down the contrast/saturation a bit?

Just my 2cents
smile
Aug 10 13 03:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jakov Markovic
Posts: 1,122
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


Zoom out when you work. You lost yourself in the detail, and now the whole thing is odd.

The model looks odd to begin with.

Start with an easier image. smile
Sep 18 13 06:15 am  Link  Quote 
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