You have good technical skills. I just think some of the concepts are a little wacky but that's up to personal taste anyway.
I like this shot!
I don't care for the rest, not because it isn't good photography but you don't have any models in your port yet. It's hard to judge what you can do. It's obvious you know how to use the camera. The rest is just putting it to use for a portfolio and whatever you want to accomplish. Your bio is too long!!! Jeez...it's not supposed to be a book!
As for me it's all shits and giggles at the end of the day!