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Mrcsb
Posts: 81
Nyíregyháza, Szabolcs-Szatmár-Bereg, Hungary


May 20 13 07:12 am  Link  Quote 
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Ashish Arora
Posts: 2,064
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


From what I can see - it doesn't seem you spent more than a few minutes on the image, it still needs a lot of good skin work, esp. around the mouth, the hands and some distracting flyaway hair need to be cloned out.

Regarding tones - skin is too pale and makes her look like she has a fever.
May 23 13 10:48 am  Link  Quote 
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Mrcsb
Posts: 81
Nyíregyháza, Szabolcs-Szatmár-Bereg, Hungary


Oh it looks like i should buy a new monitor - i just checked it on my friend's, and the colors are different.

Thank you for the reply smile
May 25 13 03:21 am  Link  Quote 
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Ovidiu Oltean
Posts: 179
Sibiu, Sibiu, Romania


Hello,
Actually i like the colors and the skin, you did a good job, just try focusing on the small details also.
On the hair for example you can take out the hairs that don't match with the flow of the rest .On skin just small things as you can see on the quick sketch i made for you.
The eyebrow need a bit work, the dust from the lense needs to be removed and the eye from the left side of the image needs a bit light.
Good luck and good job again .

http://s4.postimg.org/l6iyzwdcp/pz62_Vb_K.jpg
Jun 05 13 08:02 pm  Link  Quote 
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LarrySparks Photography
Posts: 116
Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa


This feels somewhat incomplete, cant put my finger on it....*thinking face*
Aug 07 13 02:57 am  Link  Quote 
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