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A-M-P
Posts: 17,977
Orlando, Florida, US


So here is something diferent from me, I shot this photo a couple of months back. What do you think?

https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-frc1/579011_506145642775423_1552888286_n.jpg
May 21 13 07:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,760
New York, New York, US


Well done! I just think those sheets? Or whatever hanging behind this young man are a bit of a distraction. Bugs me....I keep wanting to look at them for some reason.
May 21 13 07:21 am  Link  Quote 
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Joseph William
Posts: 1,959
Chicago, Illinois, US


Well done indeed.  I am not sure about the laundry also...
May 21 13 07:26 am  Link  Quote 
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Ed Devereaux
Posts: 603
Portland, Oregon, US


If the laundry is part of the story, as I think it is, I love it.
May 21 13 07:32 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Hawklight Imagery
Posts: 8
Garden Grove, California, US


I love the image, posing, composition and lighting.  What I see as an area of improvement is here; the white linen and it's placement is too stark of a difference from the other photo elements and competes with the subject matter.  Possible fixes may include post dropping the exposure level, changing the hue, adding a little blur, anything that bridges into a similar color palette/tone.

All in all, however, it is a very good image, caught at the right moment.  Great job!
May 21 13 07:35 am  Link  Quote 
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AJScalzitti
Posts: 12,252
Atlanta, Georgia, US


I like it.  Personally I may crop it a little diffent as I don't like subject dead center but it's well done.
May 21 13 07:37 am  Link  Quote 
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nyk fury
Posts: 2,905
Port Townsend, Washington, US


yep, get rid of those sheets and you are golden.
May 21 13 07:37 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Big A-Larger Than Life
Posts: 33,400
The Woodlands, Texas, US


Id call it a portrait as far as genre, and it's really really nice.  I love it.
May 21 13 07:37 am  Link  Quote 
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