If the idea is to attract Commercial and Bridal Clients why don't you have those as categories rather than Beauty and Fashion?
To be honest I couldn't even tell any of those pics were bridal photos.
I would also remove This image
It's not really at the same level as the other photos and really stands out in a not good way.
You should also see if you can get portrait versions of the landscape shots in the fashion images. All of that background is just wasted space on your page and they throw off the balance since there are only 2. You could also just remove them as you have plenty of shots.
Now I don't know much about make-up artistry marketing (nothing really), but if I was hiring a make-up artist I think before and after shots would sell me on your talent far more than a bunch of pictures of beautiful women that for all I know looked beautiful before you did anything.
Just my 2 cents.