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Solus
Posts: 231
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland


May 26 13 02:58 am  Link  Quote 
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Refrain Photography
Posts: 32
Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada


I love how just the slightest bit of light is catching the tip of the nipple between your fingers.

Overall...this is a great shot smile
May 27 13 10:58 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Solus
Posts: 231
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland


Refrain Photography wrote:
I love how just the slightest bit of light is catching the tip of the nipple between your fingers.

Overall...this is a great shot smile

Thanks for feeding back, much appreciated Sir.

May 28 13 09:57 pm  Link  Quote 
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C h a r l e s D
Posts: 9,304
Los Angeles, California, US


A heavy crop is in order for this shot to be more successful and salable.  Crop up from the bottom to her elbow, and crop in from the left to her hand.  That's your shot here.

If you must keep the rest, at least crop in from the left to her hand.  The dark negative space isn't helping the composition here at all.

Very nice lighting, nice everything else.  Just crop it.  Composition is off.
Jun 02 13 01:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Solus
Posts: 231
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland


Thanks Charles, I will have a look at your crop suggestion, much appreciated.
Jun 03 13 10:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
WCR3
Posts: 1,016
Houston, Texas, US


Please do something about the bumps/pimples/blemishes just below the collar bone. They're extremely distracting, to the extent that they drew my eye away from the nipple. A few seconds with the spot healing brush is all you need.
Jun 05 13 01:53 pm  Link  Quote 
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