Like the previous critique, I think my favorite image in your portfolio is this one:
It conveys the most emotion and really makes me think. It also does a great job of highlighting a models job of being more than just a pretty face.
However, there are a few images, lets call it the second row, that just don't seem to show off your beauty and contrary to that they make you look bored and pained to be modeling.
Hope that helps a little.