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Photographer
Kyle Payne Imaging
Posts: 3
San Diego, California, US


Hey all would love some Critiques
Jun 08 13 01:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 7,235
New York, New York, US


Not really much to pick on really.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130602/22/51ac2c5fbc5e1_m.jpg  The skin is a little too perfect. Aside from that, I think you are off to a good start anyway...
Jun 08 13 02:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Marissa St Claire
Posts: 98
Eugene, Oregon, US


Perhaps you could give a little more information about yourself or your goals in your bio - it seems very uninformative.

As for your actual work - get more of it. The pictures are alright, perhaps do a little bit less post-editing. They all seem over done to me. Otherwise, your portfolio doesn't really make sense. The style of photography you are going for is very unclear and you don't have enough of any one genre to really see how good you are.
Jun 08 13 02:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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