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Pistol Dreams
Posts: 75
Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada


Tell me what you think of my port. From the bio (needs an overhaul) to the photos and everything in between. You don't need to be nice, just honest. Loud opinions are appreciated but a detailed one that goes thru my flaws are most helpful big_smile
Jun 08 13 07:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Alexia Foxx
Posts: 36
Tyler, Texas, US


Pistol Dreams wrote:
Tell me what you think of my port. From the bio (needs an overhaul) to the photos and everything in between. You don't need to be nice, just honest. Loud opinions are appreciated but a detailed one that goes thru my flaws are most helpful big_smile

I will if you will!wink

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130608/20/51b3fba583318_m.jpg
Beautiful shot. Reminds me of "The Dead Weather" Treat me like your mother music video, but in a still. Wonderful capture.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130608/20/51b3fb240515c_m.jpg
I like what you are trying to do here, but you are missing the mark. Coloration is ok, but it doesn't captivate me as a professional image. More like a facebook photo from behind the scenes at an event.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130608/13/51b39529ebaa0_m.jpg
This one is listed twice as well as being your avatar, so clearly you are proud of it, however it is not a professionally captured image and is posed in a stale fashion. Other than the brunette model's expression, everyone looks stiff.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130302/20/5132d07b7735d_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130301/23/5131af2a36560_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130301/15/51313b4838033_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130301/15/513136b1272ba_m.jpg
All of these are worlds better. Any one of these could be an American Apparel ad or magazine spread. You've got a great knack for capturing 1960s feeling imagery with a really eclectic vibe. You should change your avatar to reflect this.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130227/20/512ee2e9b64a7_m.jpg
I like this one. It's crisper, showing that not only can you obtain the grungy retro feel but also more classic, clean images.

My suggestion would be to work with some different models and do some new shoots. While all of those listed are wonderful, I would like to see what you could do with another setting and another set of models.

Keep up the great work! Would appreciate your critiques and opinions as well!

xx,
A.Foxx

Jun 10 13 12:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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