I like that your portfolio shows some versatility, and variety of expressions.
My favorite is this one. It showcases a special talent that you have. I am willing to ignore the color cast on this one. If I hired you, it would be because of this one. So showcase your talents. Makes me wish I still lived in WA.
I like the lighting in this one. Interesting.
This one is stronger than the other one.
Your hands are chopped off. It looks over exposed, and the white balance looks off to me. However you have a great smile.
These two just dosn't speak to me. Might be me.