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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


I will give you a quick look and let you know what I think.

I'm not an expert but I think I know enough to make some suggestions.

Disclaimer: My opinion is merely that and not intended to insult, humiliate or dismember "all" subjects but some will PERISH LOL..... tongue

"everytime I try to get out, they pull me back in!"

I guess I can't quit....bookmark this if you want to see your response, I won't be on daily.....
Jun 26 13 08:19 am  Link  Quote 
Model
JonBeneteau
Posts: 38
Delta, Colorado, US


you can always critique mine! i know i dont have many pictures right now, but i should be adding to it next week.
Jun 26 13 08:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


JonBeneteau wrote:
you can always critique mine! i know i dont have many pictures right now, but i should be adding to it next week.

Good bio, short and to the point.
You have some good photos. Nothing terrible. I will suggest you work on those abs, they aren't bad but should be more defined. Get yourself some "Hugo Boss" type of shots in a suit, lifestyle. I am sure you have seen the ads.  Best of luck!

Jun 26 13 08:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 162
Sacramento, California, US


I welcome your critique. Thanks.

(note that I know I currently have two versions of the same shot in my port, one color and one black and white, that I'm getting an opinion on. One of those will get removed soon).
Jun 26 13 08:50 am  Link  Quote 
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Adam J Caldwell
Posts: 289
Manchester, England, United Kingdom


Fire away =]
Jun 26 13 09:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,082
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Marin Photography wrote:
I will give you a quick look and let you know what I think.
I'm not an expert but I think I know enough to make some suggestions.

Disclaimer: My opinion is merely that and not intended to insult, humiliate or dismember subjects. big_smile

Go for it

Jun 26 13 09:26 am  Link  Quote 
Model
W I L L O W
Posts: 343
Portland, Oregon, US


Mine please!!
Jun 26 13 09:26 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Paige Morgan
Posts: 4,058
New York, New York, US


Sure.
Jun 26 13 09:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Tirado Photography
Posts: 4,146
New York, New York, US


Take a look and let me know. Thanks.
Jun 26 13 09:32 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Stacy Leigh
Posts: 3,062
New York, New York, US


Yeah... let's hear it!

smile
Jun 26 13 09:42 am  Link  Quote 
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I Ference Photography
Posts: 1,096
Rochester, New York, US


I'll take a quick critique!
Jun 26 13 09:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 3,974
Alexandria, Virginia, US


you're welcome to have a flick through - but I have so much shizz I can't imagine it would be too "quick" lol....
Jun 26 13 09:50 am  Link  Quote 
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RSA Photography
Posts: 7
Waipio, Hawaii, US


Go for it!
Jun 26 13 10:10 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


DRaskin Photography wrote:
I welcome your critique. Thanks.

(note that I know I currently have two versions of the same shot in my port, one color and one black and white, that I'm getting an opinion on. One of those will get removed soon).

You have a few shots that I would remove.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130624/10/51c8859b783eb_m.jpg The lighting is a bit too strong on this one.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130611/11/51b768c9e34c8_m.jpg A little fill light would have made this better. Your model is in the dark.  Aside from that you are doing really good! You have some interesting concepts. Best of luck!

Jun 26 13 10:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 1,944
Los Angeles, California, US


Ok!
Jun 26 13 10:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Adam J Caldwell wrote:
Fire away =]

Good taste, nice style. You know how to flatter your subjects.

Jun 26 13 10:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Rik Williams wrote:

Go for it

Rock star with a camera....no suggestions needed.

Jun 26 13 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


W I L L O W wrote:
Mine please!!

I don't like the first photo in your port but the rest kicks assets...You don't need help!

Jun 26 13 10:22 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Paige Morgan wrote:
Sure.

You have shot with some great photographers, I can see why, you got talent! Next....

Jun 26 13 10:24 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Take a look and let me know. Thanks.

I like that you mix it up - indoors / outdoors. Rock star with a camera...next!

Jun 26 13 10:29 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


the doll photographer wrote:
Yeah... let's hear it!

smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130626/08/51cb07cea180c_m.jpg Aside from this image, I love your work! Rock star status! Next!

Jun 26 13 10:30 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


I Ference Photography wrote:
I'll take a quick critique!

I am a fan, so I don't need to look. Rock star status! Next!....Nothing I can say to help you....

Jun 26 13 10:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Catnapping
Posts: 3,766
Brooklyn, New York, US


if you're still going!
Jun 26 13 10:32 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Azia Rose
Posts: 224
Portland, Oregon, US


Me me me!
Jun 26 13 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Fotografica Gregor wrote:
you're welcome to have a flick through - but I have so much shizz I can't imagine it would be too "quick" lol....

You are right! Too many images! I would cut it down but I can see your problem, too many good ones!  More nudes, you know how to flatter you subjects. Rock star! Next....

Jun 26 13 10:36 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Azia Rose wrote:
Me me me!

Anyway, I love your face!  Keep pushing! You are almost awesome!

Jun 26 13 10:39 am  Link  Quote 
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Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 3,974
Alexandria, Virginia, US


Marin Photography wrote:

You are right! Too many images! I would cut it down but I can see your problem, too many good ones!  More nudes, you know how to flatter you subjects. Rock star! Next....

Nudes go to my tumblr smile

http://fotografica-gregor.tumblr.com/

Yeah I've got to get brutal about cutting down....

Jun 26 13 10:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Ok!

Love your work Jorge. Great style and taste. Rock star! Next...

Jun 26 13 10:42 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Westdahl Studio
Posts: 330
Seattle, Washington, US


Shoot
Jun 26 13 10:45 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Catnapping wrote:
if you're still going!

More full length shots. You have a good eye and lots of emotive value to your images. One image is missing feet by the way. Keep it up, you are on the right track!

Jun 26 13 10:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Studio45Photography
Posts: 17
Peterborough, Ontario, Canada


Whenever you have the time!
Jun 26 13 10:48 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


RSA Photography wrote:
Go for it!

Cut down on images from the same shoot. Too much of a good thing isn't good. Anyway, you are on the right track. Keep shooting!

Jun 26 13 10:49 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Studio45Photography wrote:
Whenever you have the time!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120704/11/4ff4867a28dbd_m.jpg The exposure is off on this one. A few others it could be better but not terrible. It's tricky shooting outdoors sometimes. Just treat your models like vampires outdoors and pretend they will burn if the light is too strong. Aside from that I would cut down the number of photos you post. Pick your best, be hard on yourself it helps. I delete stuff almost all the time. Then I put it back think and delete again. You are almost there! Keep shooting!

Jun 26 13 10:56 am  Link  Quote 
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Stacy Leigh
Posts: 3,062
New York, New York, US


Marin Photography wrote:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130626/08/51cb07cea180c_m.jpg Aside from this image, I love your work! Rock star status! Next!

removed... thanks!

Jun 26 13 10:59 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Westdahl Studio wrote:
Shoot

I love it, no one in there has clothes! haha I would cut down the number of images from the same shoot. It hurts you because it looks like you don't have lots of ideas when you do that. Mix it up, forget folders. Try not to use the same ideas over again. It's hard, I know but you are almost there, so close!! Change locations, backgrounds and maybe try shooting someone with clothes? big_smile Best of luck!

Jun 26 13 11:01 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


the doll photographer wrote:

removed... thanks!

Welcome. It's not a bad photo but the color treatment on it throws the rest of your images off. It immediately made me think "what happened?"..

Jun 26 13 11:03 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Danielle Reid
Posts: 3,018
Little Rock, Arkansas, US


me?
Jun 26 13 11:06 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Westdahl Studio
Posts: 330
Seattle, Washington, US


Marin Photography wrote:

I love it, no one in there has clothes! haha I would cut down the number of images from the same shoot. It hurts you because it looks like you don't have lots of ideas when you do that. Mix it up, forget folders. Try not to use the same ideas over again. It's hard, I know but you are almost there, so close!! Change locations, backgrounds and maybe try shooting someone with clothes? big_smile Best of luck!

Thanks for the input... quite valid. Nudes fascinate me! Perhaps that is obvious.

Jun 26 13 11:07 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,098
New York, New York, US


Danielle Reid wrote:
me?

Oh Danielle....You need good togs and practice but you knew that already!...Keep pushing! It is much improved though.....

Jun 26 13 11:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,436
Newark, New Jersey, US


shoot
Jun 26 13 11:15 am  Link  Quote 
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