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Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Hey... so... I will choose which picture I believe is not benefiting your portfolio and which should be your avatar!

Bit of advice to me would be cool too!
Thanks Looking forward to seeing your pictures!


GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jul 01 13 01:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Beth Chambers
Posts: 465
London, England, United Kingdom


Me please smile
Jul 01 13 01:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
J O H N A L L A N
Posts: 9,941
Santa Ana, California, US


Ok - thanks.

Advice: I don't think the following image is doing you any good. It's under-exposed and the general photography is lacking. I can see why you like it, as it's an interesting costume. Maybe there's a better version.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130404/09/515da75478a87_m.jpg
Jul 01 13 01:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Maria J Campos
Posts: 252
Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands


tell me
Jul 01 13 01:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Beyond the Physical
Posts: 901
HAZLET, New Jersey, US


Let's hear it.
Jul 01 13 01:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Darryn Adams
Posts: 20
Boston, Massachusetts, US


I would like to hear.
Jul 01 13 02:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 821
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


me next?
Jul 01 13 02:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Beth Chambers wrote:
Me please smile

yo!
Lovely photos well done

love this

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2506472/viewall

And this can go for me..
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31292745

I think its just your expression on here all your others are great though I just find this strange to look at but otherwise great port!

Jul 01 13 02:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


J O H N  A L L A N wrote:
Ok - thanks.

Advice: I don't think the following image is doing you any good. It's under-exposed and the general photography is lacking. I can see why you like it, as it's an interesting costume. Maybe there's a better version.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130404/09/515da75478a87_m.jpg

See.... I really like my facial expression I find it effortlessly sexy? Maybe I am mistaken but I do appreciate your comment!

Jul 01 13 02:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
E L I N
Posts: 199
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Just starting out but let me know!
Jul 01 13 02:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Maria J Campos wrote:
tell me

This is just not up to par with your other work.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29591608

There's a great contrast between the Red dress and green moss and tree and it really works but I think there could have been a better pose, it seems a little amateur compared to the rest of your pictures? Maybe you have some more from the same shoot?

The best!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26270323

I just F*cking love this so bloody much. The trees int he backgorund are beautiful the colours are amazing and the models hair goes so well with the sand and its just wonderful... amazing!

And how can you post a picture I it always sounds so bloody difficult...

Jul 01 13 02:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Beyond the Physical wrote:
Let's hear it.

CUT
Only because of the shadow its created on his chest the lighting looks a bit funny along with his facial expression... takes away from your other great work slightly.

Great shot!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32951393

I love this, I love her hair I love the black and white I love the effortless come to bed eyes but she still looks classy the bed behind her looks really great and i love the fact she has a wrinkle in her side its really sexy and I must try and re- create this pose! BRAVO.

Jul 01 13 03:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Jamina Wittke wrote:

CUT
Only because of the shadow its created on his chest the lighting looks a bit funny along with his facial expression... takes away from your other great work slightly.

Great shot!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32951393

I love this, I love her hair I love the black and white I love the effortless come to bed eyes but she still looks classy the bed behind her looks really great and i love the fact she has a wrinkle in her side its really sexy and I must try and re- create this pose! BRAVO.

SORRRY! heres the link... CUT
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32584075

Jul 01 13 03:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MickCetera
Posts: 276
Chicago, Illinois, US


aww ye always a tough question for me!! But I need to make room for newer better ones! HELP!! :-)
Jul 01 13 03:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dd photography
Posts: 903
San Diego, California, US


Deal.

For you, drop this one immediately!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130404/09/515da75478a87_m.jpg


Not flattering to you in the least bit.
Jul 01 13 03:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
HEATHER 19
Posts: 1,134
Boston, Massachusetts, US


OK smile
Jul 01 13 04:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,274
Los Angeles, California, US


Sure!
Jul 01 13 04:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
JonBeneteau
Posts: 38
Delta, Colorado, US


ahh, nevermind
Jul 01 13 05:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Samantha Ashley Mathias
Posts: 59
Tampa, Florida, US


I'm game smile
Jul 01 13 05:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Smitty s Photography
Posts: 80
Sacramento, California, US


Help meeeeee!!       :-)
Jul 01 13 05:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah_
Posts: 1,487
Denver, Colorado, US


Yes please! smile

My advice to you is to get rid of the pictures with old hair colors.  I don't know which one is current, and you look completely different depending on the color (actually, it's pretty impressive how shockingly different you look with each hair color/style).  If someone were to book you, they wouldn't know which you would be showing up. smile
Jul 01 13 06:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
narie
Posts: 102
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Would like to know your opinion! I'm bad at reviewing my own port..

For your port I'd get rid of this one:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/14/51cca921b8e79_m.jpg

It's not a particularly bad photo, but it doesn't show any posing ability like the rest of your port
Jul 01 13 06:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Darryn Adams wrote:
I would like to hear.

Hey there!

cut!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32470405
I don't like the closeness or the lighting, the lighting is too dark on her right side which makes her face look a bit lopsided? And the quality of the picture isn't too great either...

Love this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#32783572

Glad to see this as your avatar definately your strongest look but be careful again of the lighting its a bit too bright on the right side and too little on the left, but stunning model and picture very naturally beautiful amd you captured that. I'm sure after more practice you will get the lighting thing down! smile

Jul 02 13 04:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


TDSImages wrote:
me next?

I dont quite know why but this maybe cut...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16471139
I think its the fact it doesn't really seem to fit in with any others? I appreciate you have a lot of comments and views but i feel this picture is just so different from all the others,and the quality isn't that great either....Maybe would have been better not in sepia... I have a a pet hate against sepia its very easy for it to look amateur and like its been taken on a phone camera then edited...

LOVE THIS
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31920839
I love the shape shes pulling and how the fabric falls on her left leg and from hip, her facial expression is amazing shes weird and unique looking but its beautiful great capture... definately profile pic!

Jul 02 13 04:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Gabrielle Ann  wrote:
Just starting out but let me know!

CUT
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33060786
I feel this images really lets you down. The tattoo distracts and makes it look a  bit tacky, wether its the lighting or the closeness I am not sure... and your face looks really squished and different from all the other... this is definately dragging your portfolio down epecially when the rest of the images are very good... I do like your eyes though lovely colours but your face and tattoo just don't work at all.

definate AVI
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33007273
This is a genious shot... your avatar now is good but lacks expression (try to be more aware of your face like 24/7 when your shooting) whereas this is effortlessly BRILLIANT your body looks amazing, your tights look great with your tattoo and the white background your pose is right and your face is gorgeous! DEFINATE AVI!

Jul 02 13 04:53 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


MickCetera wrote:
aww ye always a tough question for me!! But I need to make room for newer better ones! HELP!! :-)

cut!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33085453
I like smoking shots but I don't like this... you look so different and if you looked more like the others then it may have been brilliant.. have you got more from the same shoot? Maybe its the angle but its just a bit not on par with the rest!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#31854402
Great headshot... lovely clarity and you look very handsome and Calvin Klein mode material lovely shot well done!

Jul 02 13 04:59 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
White Lotus Design
Posts: 25
Miami Beach, Florida, US


tell me smile
Jul 02 13 05:07 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


dd photography wrote:
Deal.

For you, drop this one immediately!
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130404/09/515da75478a87_m.jpg


Not flattering to you in the least bit.

Here ..get rid
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27546632
The headshots medeoker... its pretty yes but its a bit boring, theres no real connection between the camera and the model and the hat doesn't work either... your other works just soo amazing every picture I looked at was like WOW... and WOW thats amazing and then that one was like... ahh okay. if that makes sense?

And just found this now...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31236965
But is she cross eyed? The symmetry int he eyes just isn't there making it look a bit lop sided the rest of the picture is great though!


Absolutely LOVE THIS
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24710233
Its her hand covering half her face and her hair just touching her nipples tts soo fucking sexy but its the little things that make an outstanding photo and this is one... amazing work... and port well done!

Jul 02 13 05:09 am  Link  Quote 
Model
E L I N
Posts: 199
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Jamina Wittke wrote:

CUT
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33060786
I feel this images really lets you down. The tattoo distracts and makes it look a  bit tacky, wether its the lighting or the closeness I am not sure... and your face looks really squished and different from all the other... this is definately dragging your portfolio down epecially when the rest of the images are very good... I do like your eyes though lovely colours but your face and tattoo just don't work at all.

definate AVI
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33007273
This is a genious shot... your avatar now is good but lacks expression (try to be more aware of your face like 24/7 when your shooting) whereas this is effortlessly BRILLIANT your body looks amazing, your tights look great with your tattoo and the white background your pose is right and your face is gorgeous! DEFINATE AVI!

It's deleted now! Thanks for your input smile

Jul 02 13 05:16 am  Link  Quote 
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Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


HEATHER 19 wrote:
OK smile

Find this a bit boring compared to the rest of your images its still a good picture but maybe lacks a bit of energy?
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28270218

This should be your avi... your avi now for some reason looks a bit amateur its great quality and lovely lighting and model but I think its the candy and the white background that gets me...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28843446
Very editorial and fashion shot its great really capture, but maybe crop just below the white chunky bracelet something aout the elbow which puts me off  but once I covered it it looked MUCH better!
Thank you! Great port!

Jul 02 13 05:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camabs
Posts: 323
Utrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands


yes please smile

edit:
as for your port. It is pretty good already, showing your versatility and ability to pose and create facial expressions. If I would have to remove one, it would be:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130627/14/51cca921b8e79_m.jpg

Not because it is a bad picture, it just doesn't add that much to your pf imho.

You may want to add a few portraits and/or outdoor shots if you have ones that are of similar quality as the rest of your pf.
Jul 02 13 05:19 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Gabrielle Ann  wrote:

It's deleted now! Thanks for your input smile

NO problem smile

Jul 02 13 05:22 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Sure!

CUT...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29050583
it looks like shes just stubbed her toe and the shape isnt that great, you have other images similar to that which are much stronger.

This would be one of your best....
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32290421
if her thing wasn't popping out... the vagina doesn't do anything for this picture it doesn't go with the jacket or the shades, sure its odd which is probably what you wanted but it doesn't work... crop it and then make it your avi... although I love your avi you have right now too its awesome ... and great port!

Jul 02 13 05:34 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Samantha Ashley Mathias wrote:
I'm game smile

Sorry I can tell you like this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33061311
But its not up to par on a professional level with your others... the pose is okay and the lighting is a bit bright and the quality of the shot is also not great.
Mayebe this too... looks like its been taken on a phone
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29197770
and this one is just not as good as the other one like that plus you have a lot in that outfit!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27762965

This should definately be your avi!
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29272908 amazing photo your eyes are gorgeous and your hair is super cool very fashion.

Jul 02 13 05:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Smitty s Photography wrote:
Help meeeeee!!       :-)

I am guessing your relatively new to photography and some of your picture show improvement and proffesionality and then some drag it back down again. I am going to be very harsh and tell you which pictures to keep and the rest can go as they look amateur but keep shooting, your definatley getting there and learning is what it is all about.
Keep these...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31001361

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#25716921

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#25716598

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#16217693
MaYByeb crop this just underneath her breasts? I believe it would make a BIG difference

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 61#6950781


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#32817125

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#30121918
This one ^ is one off my favorite..


Delete everything else... Good start...maybe try and look for slightly more proffessonal models who know how to pose better etc. And throw some creativity in there and mix it up a bit. If your passionate about photography save up for a better camera thats something you definately need... also it doesn't matter if you have two pics... if their amazing then people will want to work with you!
good luck and good start!

Jul 02 13 05:54 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jamina Wittke
Posts: 50
Carlisle, England, United Kingdom


Sarah_ wrote:
Yes please! smile

My advice to you is to get rid of the pictures with old hair colors.  I don't know which one is current, and you look completely different depending on the color (actually, it's pretty impressive how shockingly different you look with each hair color/style).  If someone were to book you, they wouldn't know which you would be showing up. smile

Thanks for your advice! On some of the occasions I am wearing a wig... e.g black hair.
Your so stunning like I have said before and I am oh so jealous of your editorial and high fashion look (I wanted to do high fashion but I didn't grow upwards I grew outwards on my boobs and ass and my hips are the size of the moon... disappointing)
I don't particularly think any of your pictures should be cut but if it was one it would be this

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11543692

Its just not as WOW as your others but I also think it shows versatility for catalogue work etc. But your amazing its unreal. You should definitely return to full time modelling and I also read you have a masters so your beauty and brains.. OMG. Like really really well done you should be really proud of yourself, your a type of model I look up to!

Thank you smile

Jul 02 13 06:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah_
Posts: 1,487
Denver, Colorado, US


Jamina Wittke wrote:

Thanks for your advice! On some of the occasions I am wearing a wig... e.g black hair.
Your so stunning like I have said before and I am oh so jealous of your editorial and high fashion look (I wanted to do high fashion but I didn't grow upwards I grew outwards on my boobs and ass and my hips are the size of the moon... disappointing)
I don't particularly think any of your pictures should be cut but if it was one it would be this

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11543692

Its just not as WOW as your others but I also think it shows versatility for catalogue work etc. But your amazing its unreal. You should definitely return to full time modelling and I also read you have a masters so your beauty and brains.. OMG. Like really really well done you should be really proud of yourself, your a type of model I look up to!

Thank you smile

Omg thank you! That has to be by far one of the sweetest reviews I have ever gotten! Can I give you a hug? Lol

Jul 02 13 08:45 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
L Raye
Posts: 5,006
Petaluma, California, US


Which are they?
Jul 02 13 09:12 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam J Caldwell
Posts: 289
London, England, United Kingdom


Yesmmm please

And I have nothing to add that hasn't already been said above.

Shout me when you are in Manchesterrrr =]
Jul 02 13 09:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 164
Sacramento, California, US


If you're still going at this, I'd love to hear your opinions.

As far as review of your port, it looks like you already cut the pic that others were saying wasn't flattering. The only other thing I can say, is I'd possibly edit down your "about me" section, or section it off into paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read.
Jul 02 13 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
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