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Bonillaphotography
Posts: 20
Westbury, New York, US


Hey guys i would like some feed back on my photos. So i can grow as a photographer i been doing this for 6 months so i would like some feed back so i can work on my good and bad areas
Jul 13 13 03:39 pm  Link  Quote 
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Amber Dawn - Colorado
Posts: 6,049
Castle Rock, Colorado, US


6 Months and only 4 images? Hard to go off of those but they arnt the best images they don't speak to me.
Jul 13 13 05:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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The Effective Image
Posts: 3,933
Lansing, Michigan, US


Kinda 'gimmicky'... the hair flip in water is an 'old' idea and sorta cliche, unfortunately you 'lost' the model's face.

The car light tracks... been done MUCH better by others and also sorta cliche.

Work on your portraits. The 'fuckdown' hat shot doesn't shock anybody these days and the rest of the image says nothing about the model.

The portrait shot is your best, and most likely to help you find models here on MM. You screwed it up with the obtrusive logo. Make the logo smaller and position it away from the model.

Good luck!

Just my opinion.
Jul 13 13 07:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark C Smith
Posts: 733
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


The hair flip catches the model in a very unfortunate facial expression.

And why light trails on a modelling site?
Jul 13 13 07:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bonillaphotography
Posts: 20
Westbury, New York, US


The Effective Image wrote:
Kinda 'gimmicky'... the hair flip in water is an 'old' idea and sorta cliche, unfortunately you 'lost' the model's face.

The car light tracks... been done MUCH better by others and also sorta cliche.

Work on your portraits. The 'fuckdown' hat shot doesn't shock anybody these days and the rest of the image says nothing about the model.

The portrait shot is your best, and most likely to help you find models here on MM. You screwed it up with the obtrusive logo. Make the logo smaller and position it away from the model.

Good luck!

Just my opinion.

Jul 13 13 07:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bonillaphotography
Posts: 20
Westbury, New York, US


thanks for the opinions hey will help me grow into a better photographer
Jul 13 13 07:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark Salo
Posts: 8,039
Olney, Maryland, US


Nos. 2 & 4 are too distorted for my taste.  No. 5 seems to be distorted also, but I wouldn't have noticed if it weren't for the other two.
Jul 13 13 08:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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