The Effective Image wrote:
Kinda 'gimmicky'... the hair flip in water is an 'old' idea and sorta cliche, unfortunately you 'lost' the model's face.
The car light tracks... been done MUCH better by others and also sorta cliche.
Work on your portraits. The 'fuckdown' hat shot doesn't shock anybody these days and the rest of the image says nothing about the model.
The portrait shot is your best, and most likely to help you find models here on MM. You screwed it up with the obtrusive logo. Make the logo smaller and position it away from the model.
Just my opinion.