Just quickly a few things I see. Lots of repetition.
This is a very odd pose. Not a great photo to begin with but the pose makes it look like you're ducking or hiding from something
One or the other, it's unnecessary and clutering to post two images with the same look
This really doesn't work. catchlight in your eye would have helped not not a great pose or idea
Not a great crop. We either need to see your hands or crop up higher so there's not so much arm. If we see elbows we want to see hand. If we see knees we want to see feet.
Pick one from the bottom 2 rows and run with it, we don't need to see 8 pictures of same look
Now, on the good side, you at least display different expressions throughout your port. I think I could weed the whole thing down to about 6 images and make it much stronger overall.
You have a nice look and I can see you're putting effort into your work. Keep shooting and practice posing. When photographers give you images that are poorly cropped, reject them or at least don't use them.