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Kaela Kino
Posts: 71
Duluth, Minnesota, US

Hi everyone!

I kind of missed spring cleaning but I've been realizing as I've been perusing the forums that my portfolio could definitely use a clean up. Let me know what images you think need to go!!

Also, feel free to tell me your favorites, and why, if you feel so inclined smile A spoonful of sugar makes the medicine go down...

Thanks in advance!
Jul 14 13 02:04 pm  Link  Quote 
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,943
Lansing, Michigan, US

I'd think about dumping the 'olympic' shots... bow and arrow, javelin, and discus.

Yeah, they're 'iconic', they're also sorta cliche, and IMHO they don't 'fit' well in a glamor nude portfolio.

Just my opinion.

PS - After looking at your portfolio again again, I realized those shots have the most 'views'. So I suppose they aren't going anywhere... oh well.
Jul 14 13 06:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Lakin S
Posts: 308
Ashland, Kentucky, US

Your portfolio shows you have such a confidence, you go girl wink
I love the off color , darker photos near the bottom...
I dont care for the candle , hot tub photo. Too dark cant see you very well, not the best photo...
and this one http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33171605
the angle makes your top look to broad !
Nice work xo.
Jul 14 13 10:03 pm  Link  Quote 
SKITA Studios
Posts: 1,564
Boston, Massachusetts, US

Leaning on arm makes it look huge:

Missing arms and wrinkled waist:

Open mouth expression isn't great:

Not a great angle/expression:

On the positive side...nice angle, and shows your muscle tone:
Jul 15 13 09:06 am  Link  Quote 
Kaela Kino
Posts: 71
Duluth, Minnesota, US

Thanks so much for your input!

I've narrowed my portfolio down to 42 images instead of 60. I hope it is stronger because of it! Thanks for your help! smile
Jul 15 13 12:46 pm  Link  Quote 
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