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Nicole Michelle
Posts: 1,463
Albany, New York, US


I just passed the 4 year mark. I can't believe it. 4 years of modeling. Time sure has flown!

I'd love for a few people to look through my port and tell me my best and worst photo and why. Please don't critique the lighting or editing. Just my pose, expression and such as a model.

If you have any suggestions on improvement or where you think I do my best work that would be great to hear! Fashion, beauty, glamour, etc.

Thanks!  smile
Jul 14 13 10:53 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lakin S
Posts: 308
Ashland, Kentucky, US


Nicole Dawes wrote:
I just passed the 4 year mark. I can't believe it. 4 years of modeling. Time sure has flown!

I'd love for a few people to look through my port and tell me my best and worst photo and why. Please don't critique the lighting or editing. Just my pose, expression and such as a model.

If you have any suggestions on improvement or where you think I do my best work that would be great to hear! Fashion, beauty, glamour, etc.

Thanks!  smile

Your an extreme beauty, really. I was surprised when I looked into your portfolio due to how your avatar portrays you. IMO not personally one of your best , considering you have such good ones. I also do not care for this one, does no justice for your face and eyes even though it does have good color...
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111129/05/4ed4d8712e855_m.jpg

Jul 15 13 01:39 am  Link  Quote 
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SKITA Studios
Posts: 1,557
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Love this for the angle on your face (not the cleavage :-) that makes it look great and is still one of my fav shots of you:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16933554

Love this iconic fashion shot pose/look/styling:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24215225

Intensity of this look goes w/ the hair...the hair was too messy though:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28210328

Don't like this pose because it makes your close hip look way too big:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20063196

Bunching the cloth together makes your waist look large:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33088091

Nice smile in your eyes but the hair front of your mouth is a major distraction:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21008199

Great job for modeling for only 4yrs.  Nice range of expressions and nice variety of shots.
Jul 15 13 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Nicole Michelle
Posts: 1,463
Albany, New York, US


Thank you both of you! I like to hear what I can improve on. smile
Jul 16 13 11:24 am  Link  Quote 
Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 3,729
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I would work on improving facial expression (I think everyone can, honestly) and poses.

You have a good variety of clothing/locations but a lot of your poses are the same.
I think the biggest thing you could improve on is knowing where to put your hands. In 11 of your pictures (not including your beauty pictures) you have your arm/hand up near your face. If I included the beauty pictures that would be over half of the shots in your portfolio. Just something that I noticed.
Jul 16 13 11:45 am  Link  Quote 
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