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Model
Sarah Beggs
Posts: 20
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


I'm always looking for criticism, so give me your worst! Please and thank you. smile)
Thanks to those who comment. smile
Aug 19 13 06:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 4,496
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


I like the natural expression in this one in both your body and your face.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86ae1145d7c_m.jpg

By comparison, you have a vacant/blank sort of expression in many of your photos.

There is lots to like about these two photos, but your expression (face and body) seems somewhat reserved/tenuous.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130730/13/51f81f9d1caec_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130718/04/51e7d43c6d5fa_m.jpg

I find many of your photos to have the same half-hearted/tenuous/unengaged expression.  It is unclear the emotion the photo is trying to convey.

I much prefer this expression and pose - you seem much more engaged in the photo and this gives it life.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33152784

The truck and tractor shots take away from your portfolio in my opinion.

This one just looks like a holiday snapshot (not that anyone takes holidays in Pakenham). 
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86b0104ca77_m.jpg



I hope that's helpful.
Aug 20 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah Beggs
Posts: 20
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


Thank you very much.. That's extremely helpful and gives me much to think about and consider when adding new photos. Anyone else please?
Aug 21 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Love_mya
Posts: 276
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Sarah Beggs wrote:
I'm always looking for criticism, so give me your worst! Please and thank you. smile)
Thanks to those who comment. smile

i like the 2nd,3rd and 4th image from the top row the most.  But i also think you should work on your expressions more, you seem to have a lot of the same facial expressions. To me it looks like your not enjoying your shoot?.. or you don't want to be there.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86ab31b9646_m.jpg i like this image, but i dont like how your legs are position in the shot, i don't know but it looks like it shouldn't be like that.. or maybe you weren't ready when the photographer took that shot?

I think this would of been a winner shot.. you look so relaxed, happy but the shadow is casting on your face and a slight blur.. http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86acdf81bc0_m.jpg

The other black and whites are very casual style, probably better for your fb photos..

just my opinion only..

Aug 22 13 08:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Eric SUN
Posts: 2,538
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Post your best photos only.I like #3,4,5,6,8,13 and 15.
Sep 17 13 04:00 am  Link  Quote 
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