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Sarah Beggs
Posts: 20
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

I'm always looking for criticism, so give me your worst! Please and thank you. smile)
Thanks to those who comment. smile
Aug 19 13 06:20 am  Link  Quote 
David Kirk
Posts: 4,442
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

I like the natural expression in this one in both your body and your face.

By comparison, you have a vacant/blank sort of expression in many of your photos.

There is lots to like about these two photos, but your expression (face and body) seems somewhat reserved/tenuous.


I find many of your photos to have the same half-hearted/tenuous/unengaged expression.  It is unclear the emotion the photo is trying to convey.

I much prefer this expression and pose - you seem much more engaged in the photo and this gives it life.

The truck and tractor shots take away from your portfolio in my opinion.

This one just looks like a holiday snapshot (not that anyone takes holidays in Pakenham). 

I hope that's helpful.
Aug 20 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
Sarah Beggs
Posts: 20
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Thank you very much.. That's extremely helpful and gives me much to think about and consider when adding new photos. Anyone else please?
Aug 21 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
Posts: 276
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Sarah Beggs wrote:
I'm always looking for criticism, so give me your worst! Please and thank you. smile)
Thanks to those who comment. smile

i like the 2nd,3rd and 4th image from the top row the most.  But i also think you should work on your expressions more, you seem to have a lot of the same facial expressions. To me it looks like your not enjoying your shoot?.. or you don't want to be there.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86ab31b9646_m.jpg i like this image, but i dont like how your legs are position in the shot, i don't know but it looks like it shouldn't be like that.. or maybe you weren't ready when the photographer took that shot?

I think this would of been a winner shot.. you look so relaxed, happy but the shadow is casting on your face and a slight blur.. http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100907/14/4c86acdf81bc0_m.jpg

The other black and whites are very casual style, probably better for your fb photos..

just my opinion only..

Aug 22 13 08:41 am  Link  Quote 
Eric SUN
Posts: 1,472
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Post your best photos only.I like #3,4,5,6,8,13 and 15.
Sep 17 13 04:00 am  Link  Quote 
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