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Model
ammie
Posts: 32
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


I am new to modelling, I have a few paid shoots, some TFP and some of my own work with my partner.
I would be interested to hear what category of modelling would work well for me.
I would like to know my best and worst pictures and why.

Ammie.
Sep 08 13 06:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Vintagevista
Posts: 10,344
Sun City, California, US


Here's my 2 pennies - your really have some lovely shots and sound poses - You have a great hourglass shape - but, you have several images that are doing you no good.

#2 image - the brown top obscures your waistline and makes it look like the widest point of your body - also, we don't see your face well - so an expression can't save the eye from looking at the waistline.

Many of the beach shots are so blown out that your leg, clothes, etc. merge into the sand - as a model, I doubt you really want to blend into the background in any way.

Some of your most recent images are really lovely - You might begin to look towards developing a sense of story into the shots - "why are you there - what is she doing"

AS I said - my 2 zinc pennies  smile
Sep 08 13 08:56 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 6,058
New York, New York, US


Your lingerie photos are ok, but the beach shots are all bad. The lighting is way off. You have a great look and good curves. I would say glamour suits you best and maybe some pinup.
Sep 08 13 09:04 am  Link  Quote 
Model
ammie
Posts: 32
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Vintagevista wrote:
Here's my 2 pennies - your really have some lovely shots and sound poses - You have a great hourglass shape - but, you have several images that are doing you no good.

#2 image - the brown top obscures your waistline and makes it look like the widest point of your body - also, we don't see your face well - so an expression can't save the eye from looking at the waistline.

Many of the beach shots are so blown out that your leg, clothes, etc. merge into the sand - as a model, I doubt you really want to blend into the background in any way.

Some of your most recent images are really lovely - You might begin to look towards developing a sense of story into the shots - "why are you there - what is she doing"

AS I said - my 2 zinc pennies  smile

Fabulous advice! that is so helpful, I did not know that!! that shot is gone! Thank you very much. OK, def going to gets some story line in there.

Sep 08 13 10:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
ammie
Posts: 32
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Marin Photography NYC wrote:
Your lingerie photos are ok, but the beach shots are all bad. The lighting is way off. You have a great look and good curves. I would say glamour suits you best and maybe some pinup.

Thank you I am going to be doing pin up, I understand so much more now.

Sep 08 13 10:49 am  Link  Quote 
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