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Kendra Torino
Posts: 6
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Sep 08 13 03:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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The Signature Image
Posts: 12,055
Gorham, Maine, US


Your bio is excellent. You are quite attractive -- but that's where it ends for me. Your port is very close to a series of snapshots thrown together. Your posing is stilted, but you can work on that.

Suggestion: There are plenty of good photographers in your area. Find one ( good one) who will work with you on a "series" of shoots. Each shoot designed with a specific purpose (studio, location, etc.) in mind. Shooting a "series" will allow you to reflect after each shoot and choose a direction for the next shoot.

Hope this helps.
Sep 16 13 06:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jakov Markovic
Posts: 1,102
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


You're great.

Work with much better photographers. MUCH BETTER, you deserve them.
Sep 18 13 06:33 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
grandart
Posts: 731
Chicago, Illinois, US


The above comments are right on - you should absolutely work with better photographers. Your PORTFOLIO is much better than the MM work. You also seem to wear a lot of "high waisted" pants and skirts, yet you have a nice balanced torso. Make it work for you.
Sep 20 13 05:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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sweet gamine
Posts: 383
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


You have a nice look; I quite like the image of you laying down in the rain.

I am noticing a number of hands-on-your-head posing. That can be fine but only up to a point and never when it results in this:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130712/10/51e041069d324_m.jpg
Your elbow is pointed towards the camera (a big no-no), and ruins what might otherwise be a nice shot.
Sep 21 13 09:25 am  Link  Quote 
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Rusheen Thompson
Posts: 7
Lithonia, Georgia, US


Hi May I Have Your Honest Feed Back
Sep 24 13 04:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steve Korn
Posts: 318
Seattle, Washington, US


Sep 24 13 04:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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