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Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


I like to know I'm improving my portfolio with great pictures feedback welcome & returned!
Sep 11 13 10:32 am  Link  Quote 
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MesmerEyes Photography
Posts: 3,011
Tyler, Texas, US


I would say that you are definitely headed in the right direction. You might want to drop some of the older images and some of the ones that are redundant such as these:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/07/523077b374120_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/07/5223555b5a96c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130902/17/52252a637b7c9_m.jpg

As you get better images replace the ones that aren't so great with them. You also shouldn't have more than a couple, three at the most of the same theme, outfit, location, etc...

Keep up the good work.
Sep 12 13 02:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


MesmerEyes Photography wrote:
I would say that you are definitely headed in the right direction. You might want to drop some of the older images and some of the ones that are redundant such as these:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130911/07/523077b374120_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/07/5223555b5a96c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130902/17/52252a637b7c9_m.jpg

As you get better images replace the ones that aren't so great with them. You also shouldn't have more than a couple, three at the most of the same theme, outfit, location, etc...

Thank you for the feedback, very appreciated!

Keep up the good work.

Sep 12 13 02:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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paragonfl
Posts: 288
Saint Petersburg, Florida, US


You have some great shots. 
IMO... pick a number of images you want, say 25, and then take out the weakest when you have a better 1. 
Use shots that show you vs. background things like waterfalls.  A few are OK but have most shots that are "tight".  Hope your are having fun ;-]
Sep 12 13 02:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


paragonfl wrote:
You have some great shots. 
IMO... pick a number of images you want, say 25, and then take out the weakest when you have a better 1. 
Use shots that show you vs. background things like waterfalls.  A few are OK but have most shots that are "tight".  Hope your are having fun ;-]

Thank you for the advice, I definitely will be trading out, I have a shoot sunday so I'll be able to add more! Take out the weaker ones.

Sep 13 13 08:00 am  Link  Quote 
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MainePaintah
Posts: 1,738
Saco, Maine, US


I really like the top row in your port! You look more relaxed and confident in them!

I don't know what your goals are in modeling, but seeing how you are a fitness instructor, I would love to see some "fitness model" photos in your port.

I think you would be a great "fitness" model!  smile
Sep 13 13 08:13 am  Link  Quote 
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Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 7,201
New York, New York, US


You just had a critique yesterday, and the day before that, so how can you improve that fast??? No one does, not that fast... big_smile I think you might be bored.
Sep 13 13 08:32 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


Marin Photography NYC wrote:
You just had a critique yesterday, and the day before that, so how can you improve that fast??? No one does, not that fast... big_smile I think you might be bored.

I just added the new pictures from my recent shoot, took off the ones A LOT seemed to dislike, so I changed it, but I do like to play on the forums,  keeps me occupied lol you have not seen all my new images. May like some... I hope lol;)

Sep 13 13 08:36 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


MainePaintah wrote:
I really like the top row in your port! You look more relaxed and confident in them!

I don't know what your goals are in modeling, but seeing how you are a fitness instructor, I would love to see some "fitness model" photos in your port.

I think you would be a great "fitness" model!  smile

Thanks, and yes I'm actually wanting to do a fitness shoot, hopefully soon, very soon!

Sep 13 13 08:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Marin Photography NYC
Posts: 7,201
New York, New York, US


Ashley Kirby wrote:

I just added the new pictures from my recent shoot, took off the ones A LOT seemed to dislike, so I changed it, but I do like to play on the forums,  keeps me occupied lol you have not seen all my new images. May like some... I hope lol;)

I am not trying to bust your bubble or anything.  I do like your look, you look great but those images just don't do it for me....Work with better photographers is the best thing you can do...

Sep 13 13 08:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley R Ann
Posts: 90
Covington, Georgia, US


Marin Photography NYC wrote:

I am not trying to bust your bubble or anything.  I do like your look, you look great but those images just don't do it for me....Work with better photographers is the best thing you can do...

hmm I could only hope, how about you fly down from BIG city NY then lol:)

Sep 13 13 08:43 am  Link  Quote 
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