On another forum is a discussion of what you think about models re-editing photographer's already edited photos. I am unsure how to approach this. Is it improper to critique the edits? Here are a couple examples of what two models think improves on my efforts.
If it is improper feel free to comment and critique on my versions alone.
18+ my version:
The model's idea of how to make it better:
Here is another couple examples:
My version, minimal edits, gray scale, minor brightness change:
Notice the veins are more prominent in his version.