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Benfleet, England, United Kingdom

Updated portfolio.
Sep 14 13 09:42 am  Link  Quote 
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US

You need to get the color-temperature under control. Most of your images are badly colorshifted.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130331/17/5158cfaede838_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120707/14/4ff8aaf82e120_m.jpg

Even this, an otherwise pretty great image, is way too blue.

Many of your images are way overprocessed. The models' skin looks plastic.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120221/18/4f4450b5cba99_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120220/13/4f42b94f5ad9f_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130331/11/5158876d9ee3b_m.jpg

Overprocessed and badly lighted.

You've got a few basically good images but the lighting is fairly flat and they lack sharpness:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120319/13/4f67983b945e3_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120315/04/4f61d7efdac8a_m.jpg

Your best image by far:
It's in black-and-white (no color to mess up) and while you sharpened it you didn't smooth it into total plasticity (almost but not quite). It's just an interesting, good basic image.
Sep 14 13 11:59 am  Link  Quote 
Images by MR
Posts: 7,735
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Why are you shooting swimsuit in such a crappy place.   Don't they have better outdoor locations more suitable?

Sep 14 13 12:09 pm  Link  Quote 
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