I have uploaded some new photos. Please could you tell me what you think to my portfolio please. Many thanks x
I think you are rather beautiful. I like your portfolio and yet there is something 'missing'.
I can't really put my finger on it but it feels like you have much more to give; that you have much more than these photos are showing.
You need something in there that's slicker, glossier, more 'front cover'.
I know that's not really helpful... sorry.
Jade - Serious Critique can be a bit of a back water - if you don't get any more responses try posting this in the 'Critique Forum'.