You're lovely, but some of those images simply aren't portfolio-worthy.
This is by far your best image but your skin is overprocessed.
Another otherwise usable image, but the overprocessing on the skin into a plastic texture and the brownish tone of the overall image diminish its value in a model's portfolio, IMO.
Borderline usable, but the left eye sunken into makeup or shadow is a problem.
Terrible images that don't belong in anyone's portfolio. That third image is almost usable, but there's something really bad going on with the face (makeup? lighting? postprocessing?) Beautiful skin on the hip, but the face is scary.
These are both images more suited to a photographer's portfolio, but they're pretty useless for a model's portfolio.
For a start, it's not a particularly bad start, but you should get more shoots with other photographers to replace most of these images ASAP.