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Retoucher
FantasyArt
Posts: 133
Deva, Hunedoara, Romania


Any critique is appreciated smile Thank you very much!

http://i44.tinypic.com/fcsodt.jpg
Sep 19 13 12:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jakov Markovic
Posts: 954
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


Cheeks are way to smooth, but it's not a bad retouch by any mean. However, if you had up to the waist or full body image, and did this kind of shaping, it would be looking quite odd. Retain the expression and bone structure.
Sep 20 13 12:19 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Native Retouch
Posts: 33
Pendleton, Oregon, US


Looks beautiful!! From the nose down, looks a little unnaturally long (even though it is natural).
Some saturation issues in the left cheek, and a bit too sharp in some areas such as sides of nose.  A+ on everything else! smile
Sep 21 13 12:35 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Ledo retouch
Posts: 889
Lodi, California, US


I like it, but would like to see some more life in the eye
Sep 22 13 12:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 4,756
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Very nice work. As someone mentioned, I'd like to see the irises lightened and a catchlight in the eye. And on high-end work like this, I'd like to see the eyelashes thickened with a few more lashes at the left.
Sep 22 13 12:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 4,756
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Camerosity wrote:
Very nice work. As someone mentioned, I'd like to see the irises lightened and a catchlight in the eye. And on high-end work like this, I'd like to see the eyelashes thickened with a few more lashes at the left and a bit of trimming on the lashes in that area.

Sep 22 13 12:50 pm  Link  Quote 
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