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Retoucher
Roman Zverev
Posts: 35
Irkutsk, Irkutsk, Russia


https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71758621/crit.jpg

this work just for practice. But I need some constructive ..
Interesting general impression, and technical moments.

thx.
Sep 27 13 02:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Native Retouch
Posts: 34
Pendleton, Oregon, US


VERY very beautiful and well done! 
I would correct the tones of the hand in the bottom right with the rest of her body.  Teeth seem to have a lot of dark shadows.
Sep 27 13 04:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Richard Pommerat
Posts: 6
Paris, Île-de-France, France


nicely done but perhaps can you do a better job with the stray hairs especially on the top. And also perhaps fix the right eyebrow.

But all around, pretty nice!
Oct 01 13 12:55 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 4,779
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Nice skin texture. I would adjust the hue of the neck and check to match the face. Also there is a gap in the hairline directly above the model's right eye (camera left). I would clone or patch in some hair to close the gap in the hairline. The whites of the model's eyes are slightly blue.
Oct 01 13 01:11 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Mike Needham Retouching
Posts: 349
Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom


http://i43.tinypic.com/9ss3v5.jpg
Oct 01 13 06:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Andy Shrestha
Posts: 6
Baltimore, Maryland, US


Mike Needham Retouching wrote:
http://i43.tinypic.com/9ss3v5.jpg

thank you. even we are learning seeing this.

Oct 01 13 04:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jakov Markovic
Posts: 954
Belgrade, Central Serbia, Serbia


Also, you Dnb everything with a very soft brush causing everything to be soft. Use both hard and soft brushes, if it means using a smaller brush use it.
Oct 09 13 03:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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