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melissa brouwers
Posts: 24
Bree, Limburg, Belgium


Hey, I am just starting as a model and I have new pictures from a shoot. Do you guys have Any advise or comments?
Oct 13 13 09:58 am  Link  Quote 
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Fototid
Posts: 30
Lund, Skåne, Sweden


While I do like the pictures looking at them together I see that you have the same facial expression in all of them.

So possibly a little variation in lips and eyes.
Oct 13 13 10:25 am  Link  Quote 
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melissa brouwers
Posts: 24
Bree, Limburg, Belgium


Oh yeah, now I see. I didn't even notice. Thanks for the advise!

Fototid wrote:
While I do like the pictures looking at them together I see that you have the same facial expression in all of them.

So possibly a little variation in lips and eyes.

Oct 13 13 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
maker-creator
Posts: 116
San Jose, California, US


As the other poster said, you definitely need to work on some facial expressions.  I also think you need to round out your portfolio with some full body shots and something that shows a little about your personality.

On a positive note, you're a pretty girl, have nice hair, and don't appear to be all marked up with tattoos which is an added plus.

Michael
Oct 13 13 10:38 am  Link  Quote 
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melissa brouwers
Posts: 24
Bree, Limburg, Belgium


Yes, I will work on it! Thank you for the advice. smile


maker-creator wrote:
As the other poster said, you definitely need to work on some facial expressions.  I also think you need to round out your portfolio with some full body shots and something that shows a little about your personality.

On a positive note, you're a pretty girl, have nice hair, and don't appear to be all marked up with tattoos which is an added plus.

Michael

Oct 13 13 10:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,889
New York, New York, US


you dont have a look for fashion so you should concentrate on commercial print- smiles, real life situations, try for advertising looks.  Good luck- btw I started to model with Dominique in Brussels
Oct 13 13 02:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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