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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,206
Los Angeles, California, US


Shot this last night.

As always, curious about reactions.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34832069 18+
Jan 03 14 07:57 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nor-Cal Photography
Posts: 2,532
Walnut Creek, California, US


Not the type of image I am fond of. But I am biased, so ignore that comment.

The eyes and mouth seem awkward.

But just one worthless opinion.    smile
Jan 03 14 01:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Raychel Adams
Posts: 54
Detroit, Michigan, US


I like the simplicity of it. Nice lightening as well.
Jan 03 14 01:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Moon Pix Photography
Posts: 3,890
Syracuse, New York, US


I think the thing that bothers me most is her right butt cheek showing...
Jan 03 14 01:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jupiter Red
Posts: 520
New York, New York, US


Well I for one,
Love it
Jan 03 14 04:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PTPhotoUT
Posts: 1,959
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Moon Pix Photography wrote:
I think the thing that bothers me most is her right butt cheek showing...

I kind of like that, but I did shoot one model whose biggest fear, when shooting nudes, was that a butt cheek might show through on a frontal shot. I did not understand her fear, but I did accommodate her.

Jan 03 14 04:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jeffrey M Fletcher
Posts: 4,314
Asheville, North Carolina, US


Very nice. You've a minimalist style with a precise line that is stark and lovely. I like this image.
Jan 03 14 04:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Postcards FT Wasteland
Posts: 943
Washington, District of Columbia, US


I like it. Has that fashion feel to it, and bold beauty with the nudity. Cool shot.
Jan 03 14 09:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,206
Los Angeles, California, US


Thank you Raychel, Red, Jeffrey, and Postcards, for your very kind words.

It's very nice when someone "gets it".
Jan 04 14 01:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Drew Smith Photography
Posts: 5,209
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom


Not to my personal liking. Doesn't mean it's bad, just not my taste in lighting, pose or model. Apart from that I think it's great. smile
Jan 04 14 02:00 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MesmerEyes Photography
Posts: 2,788
Tyler, Texas, US


Drew Smith Photography wrote:
Not to my personal liking. Doesn't mean it's bad, just not my taste in lighting, pose or model. Apart from that I think it's great. smile

I have to agree with Drew on the lighting and pose.

Jan 04 14 02:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Diary
Posts: 212
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


if it was shot with a strobe would look better with different angles of lighting. ring flash becomes too repetitive. otherwise nice image
Jan 04 14 03:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sospix
Posts: 21,103
Orlando, Florida, US


I'm enjoying your new images quite a bit, this one included, pushing the limits of photography into a more graphic realm is an interesting twist  .  .  .  almost has a Gustav Klimt surrealistic feel to it  .  .  .  nicely done  .  .  .

SOS
Jan 04 14 06:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DVP Photography
Posts: 2,845
Broomfield, Colorado, US


You asked for reactions so here's mine.

I do see a trend these days towards this kind of minimalist graphic arts approach.  I think this can be fun to experiment with but don't overdo it cause you'll get sloppy with your lighting.

Personally I don't like this style.
Jan 04 14 04:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Ferris
Posts: 3,497
New York, New York, US


Washed out lighting (I know thats what you were going for) and blah expression by the model. It has no pop.
Jan 04 14 04:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,239
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


I do like this one Jorge.

It's fashionable and almost statuesque in nature.

The way her eye's are cast down and outward gives her a sense of power, or rather, control over her environment imo.

A beautiful model candidly posed and presented in your hallmark style is a winner for mine ...and I personally couldn't care less about her butt cheek showing.
Jan 04 14 10:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Echoes
Posts: 29
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada


Pointless.
Jan 04 14 10:56 pm  Link  Quote 
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