I really need to know which pictures are good and which not and what I need to improve!

Just be honest, it doesn't have to be nice!

Weakest images you have IMHO.

Do you want comments on the quality of the photo? Or the quality of your modeling within the photo?

I am a model so comments on the modelling part would be most suitable.

from Left to Right  beggining from top to bottom  order i like 5.6.8 and 9

Height is great. Lovely figure.

You look is somewhat unpredictable. One could also say 'versatile,' which can be considered good.

I like the softer ones.

Soft, caressing hands are best. In some you have a lot of tension (fists) in your hands, and yet the pose itself, and your face, doesn't seem like it's trying to be especially 'fierce' so it looks like a somewhat delicate pose with too much tension in the hands.