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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

And why do so few fashion stories seem to have any discernible "storyline" in the traditional narrative sense?

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EDIT:

Looks like I'm ahead of the curve.

http://www.juxtapoz.com/design/no-fuckh … toryteller

As usual big_smile

May 18 14 11:41 pm Link

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FBY1K

Posts: 956

North Las Vegas, Nevada, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
And why do so few fashion stories seem to have any discernible "storyline" in the traditional narrative sense?

I have often wondered this myself and curious about people's opinions.

FBY1K

May 19 14 12:09 am Link

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Sal W Hanna

Posts: 6686

Huntington Beach, California, US

Are you talking about an editorial storyline?

May 19 14 12:38 am Link

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Michael McGowan

Posts: 3829

Tucson, Arizona, US

At least one factor is context. A picture story in a fashion sense puts the clothes into places and onto people where you get a certain sense of purpose. Even when all the clothes are different, the style remains the same to provide a linkage among images.

Any idea of a direct narrative of this happened and then this and then this has pretty much gone out the window.

But you CAN tell the story of places, of people, of fashion. The images are each a facet of this same story, none attempting to tell the whole thing. It can be as seemingly simple as a Better Homes and Gardens set about an Easter brunch, with recipes attached. The pictures are more lyrical than literal, but they help you get in touch with the concept that's being put forward.

May 19 14 12:50 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Sal W Hanna wrote:
Are you talking about an editorial storyline?

Like a 'fashion story,' which seems to have as its plot, 'hemlines are low this season.'

May 19 14 08:13 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

It just seems like it started with the movie directors, and worked its way down to the commercial spot directors, and now everyone wants to call what they do 'storytelling.'

I feel like cake decorators are going to start saying, "this is my cake story."

May 19 14 08:18 am Link

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Click Hamilton

Posts: 36555

San Diego, California, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
And why do so few fashion stories seem to have any discernible "storyline" in the traditional narrative sense?

Magazines/Fashion "stories"  are in business to sell magazine exposure and the products of their clients to specific demographics. This is advertising.

Does advertising "tell a story"? Sometimes in snippets, but not necessarily.

Advertising is more of a scientific formula. It may feel like a "story" but it's more like:

1. Capture interest and engage viewer
2. Associate name brand or product.
3. Feature, Feature, Benefit
4. Call to action

Package this as you wish to obtain the goal of exposure, ratings and sales. Guiding of perception is huge on the list. To this end, there are many tried and proven techniques.

The object is sales, not writing a novel.

Because of the huge numbers involved, "fashion" is some of the most highly commercial photography and advertising of all.

May 19 14 09:38 am Link

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Click Hamilton

Posts: 36555

San Diego, California, US

May 19 14 09:47 am Link

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RINALDI

Posts: 2870

Eindhoven, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

A set of images that are coherent and clearly produced with the intention to keep them together. Practically it means that you don't have 10 completely different moods, via art direction, styling, retouching, etc.

For example: if you submit a set called "Future of the Planet", and half of your images have elements that are related to the 60's, they might be awesome, but wrong.

Here is one that conveys a story, or at least gives me as a viewer that sense:
http://www.paulbellaart.com/gallery/tush/

May 19 14 09:53 am Link

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Mac Intosh

Posts: 308

Moose Creek, Alaska, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
It just seems like it started with the movie directors, and worked its way down to the commercial spot directors, and now everyone wants to call what they do 'storytelling.'

I feel like cake decorators are going to start saying, "this is my cake story."

and...... there is something wrong with this??? https://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-basic/huh.gif

May 19 14 10:00 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Mac Intosh wrote:
and...... there is something wrong with this??? https://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-basic/huh.gif

If the string of events is fairly neutral and straight-forward, we might call it a narrative. A narrative might not be more than a sequence of things that happened, one after the next.

I did this. Then I did this. Then this happened.

If a narrative is basically what happened, a story takes it to the next level. It creates a structure to seek and hold far more significance.

Story Leads to Meaning


http://janefriedman.com/2011/09/27/what-is-a-story/

May 19 14 10:24 am Link

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Giuseppe Luzio

Posts: 5834

New York, New York, US

A story is a visual depuction of well... A story... Do all your photos combined develop a coherent story? It doesnt get simpler than that...

May 19 14 10:32 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:
A story is a visual depuction of well... A story... Do all your photos combined develop a coherent story? It doesnt get simpler than that...

But that's not really the way magazines use the word.

Food photography isn’t just about taking a delicious image; it’s a way to tell a story about tastes, seasons, and aesthetics.

http://www.creativelive.com/courses/sto … d-diane-cu

Food Photography is storytelling now?

It's barely even a narrative, let alone something as complex as a true story.

Michael McGowan wrote:
Any idea of a direct narrative of this happened and then this and then this has pretty much gone out the window.

May 19 14 10:40 am Link

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Fotografica Gregor

Posts: 4126

Alexandria, Virginia, US

the truth of the matter as I have experienced it is that "story" in the sense of journalism is not at all what is in play as much as is creating a mood and a connection with the intended audience......

May 19 14 10:52 am Link

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Giuseppe Luzio

Posts: 5834

New York, New York, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
But that's not really the way magazines use the word.

Food photography isn’t just about taking a delicious image; it’s a way to tell a story about tastes, seasons, and aesthetics.

http://www.creativelive.com/courses/sto … d-diane-cu

Food Photography is storytelling now?

It's barely even a narrative, let alone something as complex as a true story.

there is quite a bit of storytelling in food and product photography...

you're just not listening to the food!! =P

https://www.gutewerbung.net/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/pap-mcdonald-bonbon-happy_aotw1.jpeghttps://theinspirationroom.com/daily/print/2011/11/mcdonalds_crisps_chandelier.jpg
https://files.coloribus.com/files/adsarchive/part_1533/15334905/file/mcdonalds-fast-food-restaurant-mcdonalds-olympic-games-1024-39611.jpg

do i have to "say" more?

May 19 14 11:05 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:
do i have to "say" more?

Nope. Not at all.

Still not a story, though.

smile

May 19 14 11:10 am Link

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Tiffany_B

Posts: 1551

Atlanta, Georgia, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
And why do so few fashion stories seem to have any discernible "storyline" in the traditional narrative sense?

Perhaps the "problem" is that you're looking at it to make traditional narrative sense.

I'm a writer first, and a stylist second so that may be why I get the concept but fashion stories are a bit like the "choose your own adventure" books from the 1990s in that they're not so much about a single storyline but rather about the possibilities posed. The fashion presented in magazines is meant to showcase (and hopefully sell) a fantasy and the images are the tangible depiction of the fiction created. Sometimes it's cohesive and easy to follow but oftentimes it's much more open ended and left open to interpretation and there lies what I consider its beauty and its genius.

May 19 14 11:20 am Link

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Click Hamilton

Posts: 36555

San Diego, California, US

A point, brain-jab or message is not a story.

Creating an impulse to buy a product is not telling a story.

A photo equivalent of a sound bite leading a viewer to a conclusion is not a story.

A photo that captures interest or conveys a feeling is not a story.

A bunch of photo fragments stuck together as a washed out sepia collage is not a story.

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This is David Ury practicing story telling:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgf1r2Fpiug

Could this story exist in a magazine? Sure.
Is this how fashion mongers flog their clobber? No.

May 19 14 11:22 am Link

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GeorgeMann

Posts: 1148

Orange, California, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:
A story is a visual depuction of well... A story... Do all your photos combined develop a coherent story? It doesnt get simpler than that...

But that's not really the way magazines use the word.

Food photography isn’t just about taking a delicious image; it’s a way to tell a story about tastes, seasons, and aesthetics.

http://www.creativelive.com/courses/sto … d-diane-cu

Food Photography is storytelling now?

It's barely even a narrative, let alone something as complex as a true story.


"Food Photography is storytelling now?"
Haven't you seen Kate Upton take a bite of a Carl's junior hamburger yet??
Man, that is story telling.

May 19 14 01:25 pm Link

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K I C K H A M

Posts: 14689

Los Angeles, California, US

RINALDI wrote:
A set of images that are coherent and clearly produced with the intention to keep them together. Practically it means that you don't have 10 completely different moods, via art direction, styling, retouching, etc.

For example: if you submit a set called "Future of the Planet", and half of your images have elements that are related to the 60's, they might be awesome, but wrong.

Here is one that conveys a story, or at least gives me as a viewer that sense:
http://www.paulbellaart.com/gallery/tush/

Yep.

Working in magazines, I can tell you some people submit terrible stories. The mood changes between each photo and you'd have no idea they were connected in any way. A lot of editorials are "loose stories." The pieces are all connected, but you don't necessarily know what it's saying (same with paired artwork).

May 19 14 07:15 pm Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:

there is quite a bit of storytelling in food and product photography...

you're just not listening to the food!! =P

https://www.gutewerbung.net/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/pap-mcdonald-bonbon-happy_aotw1.jpeghttps://theinspirationroom.com/daily/print/2011/11/mcdonalds_crisps_chandelier.jpg
https://files.coloribus.com/files/adsarchive/part_1533/15334905/file/mcdonalds-fast-food-restaurant-mcdonalds-olympic-games-1024-39611.jpg

do i have to "say" more?

Is there any way you could find a larger image to post?

May 19 14 09:26 pm Link

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Philipe

Posts: 5302

Pomona, California, US

K I C K H A M wrote:
I can tell you some people submit terrible stories. The mood changes between each photo and you'd have no idea they were connected in any way. A lot of editorials are "loose stories." The pieces are all connected, but you don't necessarily know what it's saying (same with paired artwork).

I agree, it blows my mind what I've seen (like wtf?!)...
I have seen some great editorial stories..

May 19 14 09:46 pm Link

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Alannah The Stylist

Posts: 1550

Los Angeles, California, US

RINALDI wrote:
A set of images that are coherent and clearly produced with the intention to keep them together. Practically it means that you don't have 10 completely different moods, via art direction, styling, retouching, etc.

For example: if you submit a set called "Future of the Planet", and half of your images have elements that are related to the 60's, they might be awesome, but wrong.

Here is one that conveys a story, or at least gives me as a viewer that sense:
http://www.paulbellaart.com/gallery/tush/

+1

May 21 14 08:19 am Link

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Alannah The Stylist

Posts: 1550

Los Angeles, California, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
And why do so few fashion stories seem to have any discernible "storyline" in the traditional narrative sense?

Basically an editorial story should have cohesiveness, though some fashion editorials do tell an narrative story.

I think your question might be based off the way you're looking at editorials.Try not to look for a narrative story but try to look for cohesion.

May 21 14 08:24 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

Alannah Jones Styling wrote:
I think your question might be based off the way you're looking at editorials.Try not to look for a narrative story but try to look for cohesion.

It's actually based on someone posting "Take a Look at my Nude Story," and everyone jumping on him for having a story with no story. And I said, "stories don't need an actual story," and everyone says, "oh, yes they do," and I said, "no they don't. Watch. I'll ask in the model forum," and that's what this is.

May 21 14 08:30 am Link

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Alannah The Stylist

Posts: 1550

Los Angeles, California, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:

It's actually based on someone posting "Take a Look at my Nude Story," and everyone jumping on him for having a story with no story. And I said, "stories don't need an actual story," and everyone says, "oh, yes they do," and I said, "no they don't. Watch. I'll ask in the model forum," and that's what this is.

Ah I see.

May 21 14 09:33 am Link

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Giacomo Cirrincioni

Posts: 22232

Stamford, Connecticut, US

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:
A story is a visual depuction of well... A story... Do all your photos combined develop a coherent story? It doesnt get simpler than that...

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
But that's not really the way magazines use the word.

Food photography isn’t just about taking a delicious image; it’s a way to tell a story about tastes, seasons, and aesthetics.

http://www.creativelive.com/courses/sto … d-diane-cu

Food Photography is storytelling now?

It's barely even a narrative, let alone something as complex as a true story.

All good photography, imho, is storytelling.  Especially in advertising.  But it can be a VERY simple, subtle story. 

If a photograph of food taken for a restaurant makes you want to go eat there, then somewhere that photo resonated with you on more than a purely visual level.

May 21 14 10:13 am Link

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Giacomo Cirrincioni

Posts: 22232

Stamford, Connecticut, US

Alannah Jones Styling wrote:
I think your question might be based off the way you're looking at editorials.Try not to look for a narrative story but try to look for cohesion.

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
It's actually based on someone posting "Take a Look at my Nude Story," and everyone jumping on him for having a story with no story. And I said, "stories don't need an actual story," and everyone says, "oh, yes they do," and I said, "no they don't. Watch. I'll ask in the model forum," and that's what this is.

HA!  Yes, you're right.

May 21 14 10:23 am Link

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Jay Leavitt

Posts: 6745

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

In my mind, and from what I have seen, the story is just an overall theme / feel. I recently had an editorial accepted where the 'story' was a woman who stayed at home all day reading. There's no story in a literary sense... but with 8 pages all hinting at the same thing, in a subtle sense, with similar feel, atmosphere, and elements - the reader can get what we're trying to convey, just by looking at the pictures.

May 21 14 11:05 am Link

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NothingIsRealButTheGirl

Posts: 35726

Los Angeles, California, US

No Fuckhead you are not a Storyteller

Design // Tuesday, 29 Jul 2014

http://www.juxtapoz.com/design/no-fuckh … toryteller

Austrian designer Stefan Sagmeister, creator of the firm Sagmeister & Walsh, talks about the transformation of the term storyteller in to a meaningless buzzword. “Story-teller” has been swept in to the lexicon of trendy art-speak, which bears many similarities to corporate jargon, in that it is a way to say something that sounds good without having to think too critically about it.

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borat

Jul 30 14 10:18 am Link

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Carlo P Mk2

Posts: 305

Los Angeles, California, US

NothingIsRealButTheGirl wrote:
now everyone wants to call what they do 'storytelling.'

True true hahaha ^_^

Remember that Olympic Athlete "issue" and how some people said that the STORY behind the "ugly" portraits of Olympians was how even such revered icons of sports are still vulnerable and are still human yada yada yada.....

and the photographer simply said

nah I just wasn't equipped properly.

http://www.dpreview.com/articles/406972 … -portraits

Jul 30 14 10:37 am Link

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Joseph William

Posts: 2039

Chicago, Illinois, US

Giuseppe Luzio wrote:

there is quite a bit of storytelling in food and product photography...

you're just not listening to the food!! =P



do i have to "say" more?

Could you have maybe posted this in a way that would not fuck up the page layout?

Jul 30 14 10:49 am Link

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Elisa 1

Posts: 3344

Monmouth, Wales, United Kingdom

Model available for 'cake story' editorial. TF considered for a year's supply. smile


Ok to the question.

I think there's some misunderstanding.

What is an editorial? Well, it's not an advert for a start so yes the pics can go I don't care if they do tell a story. That isn't what editorial is....and so it's nit what magazines mean by  'story'.


I wrote editorial for a magazine for two years. It wasn't a picture based mag though I also selected pics for some of it. It was an international journal. A bit like National Geographic but more academic. I wrote the lead 'story'.

So, should I have been writing "Once upon a time there were 3 explorers, a hundred scientists at a conference, and a bad witch that ran an industry making the whole of fairyland a bit warm....:


No. Because editorial ,  though we may refer to it as the story, is not necessarily narrative. It's THE lead story, the overview, the main feature, the magazine opinion, etc.

With picture based magazines its similar but in a picture feature. So for fashion it's going to be about the clothes for the season or coming season, set into some kind of context. Can be narrative, but not necessarily. The important thing is the clothes. It's THE news stories if you like to the mag, not a narrative story. Though it can take that form which is what I think may cause confusion. With fashion mags, it's not about the photos or the model as such, though they ate important. But the main thong I'd the clothing. That's why women buy the magazines. So it needs,to be current or future and feature the current trends, what's coming etc. So the story could be about new woollens, or hemlines, or some overall vision eg some dominatrix theme if one if the,trends is leather. So context can be important, though fashion.magazines often just leave much to the reader to add narrative to the fantastic, or it could just be pure studio shots featuring a theme across it. Always there are several designers/stockists and prices given, and it could gave a title reflecting the 'story' and with devices like alliteration , or quotes, or simply ethereal evocative prose. Eg "Lavender Leather and Lace" or "Empire of the Sun" for say some Japanese inspired summer frocks/ hats. Or it can just be stripped down to the bare bones of just the clothes and the model like a mannequin and the only writing is the stockists.

So it's the theme, the fashion vision for the season to come, etc. which may or may not include a narrative. But has ti have some cohesion, theme style and point which connects the clothes and images.


With lifestyle mags it may be more than the clothes. The narrative may be more abstract than a narrative, but the setting and imaginary  lifestyle presented may be as important as the clothing.

Here's one I helped with the writing of. We met as a team under the overall project and vision of photographer Carl Ryan, talked about the overall vision for the shoot based on the clothes we wanted to feature. So we had influences in the clothing from 19th century hussars and the Crimea,equestrian inspired clothing, and sixties influences.eg the suit Chrys wears.  So we thought about The cult series the Prisoner and sourced some huge sphere sculptures. We wanted a sportscar reminiscent of the one in the Prisoner, and a period hotel. The latter three also added lifestyle interest to the story. So here we have an invite to narrative. Who are the women, who has arrived in the Morgan, why no men, what may they be dressed for, etc. Daywear. Then evening wear which took the form of vintage Dior dresses (complete again with stockists etc) in a luxury period room, then lingerie as it was Valentine's day issue, with a contrast between romantic and powerful lingerie statement which brought it back to The Prisoner with the giant chessboard and surreal head pieces. Around a dozen designers involved, and we had to give the 'vision' plus the team to press offices and magazine. Though fashion based, as a lifestyle mag it has to inspire people to ideas for living on this case romantic weekend getaways.

The wonderfully supportive editor came up with the story title, made some additions, but much of it was my input re text, with all the team feeding in.

http://html5.pagesuite-professional.co. … d7534aaa9f

Pages 183-187.


So hope that's a help to the process involved.


BTW.....why are you making this in the MC?

I can only answer because I have a little experience in writing editorial , am able to see it in wider magazine/newspaper context; but I'm guessing most models won't, and also the 'story' is not generally ours. We usually are just players on the stage of the production.

Jul 30 14 01:36 pm Link

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John Fisher

Posts: 2165

Miami Beach, Florida, US

https://www.johnfisher.com/images/1kimalexis0298fs.jpg
Kim Alexis who was on 12 Vogue covers,  and once was on the cover of Vogue three months in a row! Today, unless your name is Kate or Gisele, no model appears on the cover of American Vogue. Anna Wintour can't retire soon enough

I should wait for the second page so this can be read properly!

Anyway, if you can get your hands on "September Issue" (the documentary on the making of the September, 2007 issue of Vogue) you will get a look at how editorial stories are designed and shot. There is a difference between the color blocking editorial and the work of fashion editor Grace Coddington.

It's worth watching if you have any interest in shooting editorial fashion (I have seen it at least 15 times, and I pick up something new every time) and when you see the images they are throwing away, you realize there is no chance!

Coddington is the greatest living fashion editor, and tells her stories in the traditional sense, beautifully. In contrast, it's fun watching Mario Testino trying to deal with a movie "celebrity" who was picked five months in advance to be on the cover. She hacks up the entire editorial, and frustrates Testino to point he fails to get all the clothes and locations shot properly. The cover winds up being a heavily Photoshopped composite of three different images.

And don't tell me Vogue isn't selling it's covers to the movie studios to promote one of their current movies. "Celebrities" my ass, these are paid promotions plain and simple. I remember when Cindy, Naomi, Christy, Linda, Tatiana were "Celebrities" because THEY were on the covers of Vogue (and Elle, and Bazaar, and, and, and.......)?

John
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900 West Avenue, Suite 633
Miami Beach, Florida 33139
(305) 534-9322
http://www.johnfisher.com

Jul 30 14 07:51 pm Link

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Elisa 1

Posts: 3344

Monmouth, Wales, United Kingdom

John Fisher wrote:
I should wait for the second page so this can be read properly!

Anyway, if you can get your hands on "September Issue" (the documentary on the making of the September, 2007 issue of Vogue) you will get a look at how editorial stories are designed and shot. There is a difference between the color blocking editorial and the work of fashion editor Grace Coddington.

It's worth watching if you have any interest in shooting editorial fashion (I have seen it at least 15 times, and I pick up something new every time) and when you see the images they are throwing away, you realize there is no chance!

Coddington is the greatest living fashion editor, and tells her stories in the traditional sense, beautifully.

John
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John Fisher
900 West Avenue, Suite 633
Miami Beach, Florida 33139
(305) 534-9322
http://www.johnfisher.com

Indeed. An interesting life story too.

Hey...I was googling for an editorial she did for Italian Vogue of the circus with Karen Elson.  Which I can't find.
BUT....I can't quite believe this. There I am googling....and....
I came across an MM mention of her on a male models port.
Then did a double take. GUY PERRY IS ON HERE?
Is this for real? Aghhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

Anyone know if it's for real? He's the actor, and guy out of the Electric Six video
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cnsq9XtpmEk

If it's for real, which it may not be of course, why only 44 looks at his casting?

https://m.modelmayhem.com/casting/2025884

And why barely a comment on his port?
https://m.modelmayhem.com/1015460


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090101/13/495d3401b2cc7.jpg

Can somebody enlighten me? Fake port or real?

Jul 31 14 02:17 am Link