BrianaDanielle wrote:

Oh go away. You don't need any critiques.


These can go. They're not bad, but they're the worst of the good.. lol

The rasta image. This is too cool. This should be an adv or something.. if it were cropped a little more you know where haha

This is gorgeoussss. But smart sharpen is your friend. Find it, live it, love it.

Now go back to being perfect.

Aww come on, I said I wanted a kick in the arse! What's with all this nice stuff...LOL  Thanks have a great weekend!

BrianaDanielle wrote:

Yay a Makeup Artist, finally!

Okay let's see. Your natural work is beautifullll. You need more beauty shots of that. Clean beauty = $$$.

Everything on the bottom 2 rows you should get rid of. These are all cool for your personal portfolio, but not your professional one. The second anyone sees feathers they usually run the other way.

Your profile image is amazing and beautiful.

I also love love love this.

I would need to see more before I could tell you what to work on makeup wise.. but you look like you're really great.. you just need more good photographers and models. & stay away from the feathers and rhinestones. <3

(I'm moving to LA in July we should hang out. )

Thank you you're work is beautiful so that means a lot

I knowww, you're so right about the feathers. I've been getting rid of those slowly and replacing them with more natural looks. I must say it is hard for me because that stuff is fun, and every time I take on down it feels like people start complementing me on the crazy work more so than the beauty work. But you're right about everything and this was the final push I needed to take those out of my port. Thank you for that

That is awesome you're moving this way definitely keep in touch I would love to hang out

BrianaDanielle wrote:
I'm bored. Comment here and I'll tell you what you need to remove out of your portfolio, what is your best and worst image, and any advice I think can help you get more work. Go.

(Warning: I will be completely honest with you, but this is just my opinion, take it as you choose.)

Your straightforward critiques are very good.

Thank you in advance!

Jen

Marin Photography NYC wrote:

Aww come on, I said I wanted a kick in the arse! What's with all this nice stuff...LOL  Thanks have a great weekend!

Yay! About time I read a critique like this of you! Yes.