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Model

Mikka

Posts: 113

Riverside, California, US

Hey everyone!

I'm just starting to get back into modeling. I would love some good constructive criticism on my port and any other areas you have feedback on.

Specifically, what do you know my port needs more or less of?
What looks do you think work more for me than others?

AND, if you're really feeling generous, I'll take suggestions on my overall appearance. Maybe you think my look would be more marketable if I had shorter hair? or dyed my hair a different color?

All opinions and feedback are greatly appreciated (: but please, stay kind.

Thanks <3

Jul 01 14 11:23 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140630/23/53b24e69986c5_m.jpg
Photos are about details
With that much right arm showing would be great to see your hand
Wrinkles in models top on her right side plus thread at bottom also
Move models left elbow off to side, rather then point at camera [Gives arm a better shape]


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100718/16/4c438d8ac9ddb_m.jpg
Watch your backgrounds too, you have a tree growing out of your right shoulder, guy with baseball cap between border and right elbow [Avoid distractions in photos]
Angle models right toe out, will make the pose appear stronger

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101013/21/4cb68672c92a6_m.jpg
Models right hand has a bit of a claw shape, left hand missing due to immersion in water
Due to pose right leg looks large


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140623/01/53a7e48ac584a_m.jpg
This photo shows your talent and shape well, but you are getting lost in the dark background

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140630/22/53b2499d145cb_m.jpg
Love the energy

Would love to see you add a great quality studio style headshot
Full length standing dressed for a night on the town

Wish you well

Jul 02 14 05:01 am Link

Model

Mikka

Posts: 113

Riverside, California, US

Lee_Photography wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140630/23/53b24e69986c5_m.jpg
Photos are about details
With that much right arm showing would be great to see your hand
Wrinkles in models top on her right side plus thread at bottom also
Move models left elbow off to side, rather then point at camera [Gives arm a better shape]


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100718/16/4c438d8ac9ddb_m.jpg
Watch your backgrounds too, you have a tree growing out of your right shoulder, guy with baseball cap between border and right elbow [Avoid distractions in photos]
Angle models right toe out, will make the pose appear stronger

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101013/21/4cb68672c92a6_m.jpg
Models right hand has a bit of a claw shape, left hand missing due to immersion in water
Due to pose right leg looks large


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140623/01/53a7e48ac584a_m.jpg
This photo shows your talent and shape well, but you are getting lost in the dark background

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140630/22/53b2499d145cb_m.jpg
Love the energy

Would love to see you add a great quality studio style headshot
Full length standing dressed for a night on the town

Wish you well

Thank you so much! I appreciate it a bunch! (:

Jul 02 14 12:35 pm Link