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Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

I received mixed reviews on the last set I posted a few months ago... figured I would come back for more with some images I shot last week.

All are nude, but #2 is the only one that isn't implied.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460287
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460289  NSFW
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460288
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460294

As always I would love to hear what you have to say, good or bad.

Thanks for taking a look!

Jul 16 14 04:25 pm Link

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Peter House

Posts: 888

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

I like #4 because it plays up the repetitive nature of the environment by using two models in the same pose. That just appeals to me and I like the idea. Almost feel like it could have used one more model further back. But that's neither here nor there.

Cool set. smile

Jul 16 14 08:58 pm Link

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James Garfield

Posts: 692

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

Hi
Well for me there are 2 really strong images here that I feel are really very good. I think these two are pale in comparison:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460289

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/36460288

and I'd be inclined to lose them.

Great work though and great use of the textures and model.

Jul 16 14 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

DAN CRUIKSHANK

Posts: 1786

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Peter House wrote:
I like #4 because it plays up the repetitive nature of the environment by using two models in the same pose. That just appeals to me and I like the idea. Almost feel like it could have used one more model further back. But that's neither here nor there.

Cool set. smile

Thanks! It's actually the same model in two frames. I was thinking of having her move further back for a third shot but the tide came in quicker than we anticipated from the right side haha... we had to grab our gear and bail.

Jul 16 14 09:25 pm Link