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Photographer

Robert Choquette

Posts: 7

Saint-Jean-sur-Richelieu, Quebec, Canada

Looking for feedback. Feel free to rip it up.

Aug 05 14 10:44 pm Link

Photographer

WCR3

Posts: 1414

Houston, Texas, US

Very imaginative work. Beautiful lighting. Welcome to MM. My guess is that you'll have every model in eastern Canada wanting to work with you.

Aug 06 14 08:23 am Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

Really nice work!!

I might have cropped this differently, placing the model more to the (camera) left, cropping the trees down with it. Nice capture though!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/21/53e1b3381b17d_m.jpg

Watch your crop here. Cropping the fingers horizontally, is bad. Too bad, because the rest of this image is stunning!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/21/53e1b34741345_m.jpg

Try to NOT align the nose with the breastbone - e.g..
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140805/21/53e1b221215d2_m.jpg

I like your portfolio! Best of luck and continued success!

Aug 06 14 08:28 am Link

Photographer

Robert Choquette

Posts: 7

Saint-Jean-sur-Richelieu, Quebec, Canada

So I'd be better off to replace that last one with this one?

http://www.flickr.com/photos/nightstorm … 2/sizes/o/

Aug 06 14 09:56 pm Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

although the replacement image is very nice (again), the nose breaks the eye line slightly - enough so that it's distracting...

Aug 06 14 10:07 pm Link