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Model

Jesse Danger

Posts: 367

Louisville, Kentucky, US

I just updated my profile for the first time in about a year. Added some new B&W photos and can't decide which to keep and which to trash. I'd love everyones opinion. Thanks!

Aug 11 14 02:40 pm Link

Photographer

RMD Photographic Arts

Posts: 3

Orange Beach, Alabama, US

I like all 3, but the first one is my least favorite. The full length photo is my fave. Thanks for sharing smile

Aug 11 14 02:50 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140811/14/53e9379ff26ea_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140811/14/53e93240c4274_m.jpg
In the first two photos when I look into your eyes all I see are dark circles.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130909/00/522d73c616a37_m.jpg
When you look at your eyes in this photo they have life and expression

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140811/13/53e92779bca5f_m.jpg
In this photo you have locked your right leg [which is on the camera side of pose]. If you had reversed them, models left leg locked and right leg bent the pose would come off stronger
Your left eye is only a small sliver, seems to work best when eyes are looking where nose is pointed
[Suggestion, talk to your photographer and see if he would crop above the knee, would eliminate the dark legs, and take half the space off behind you. You can try covering the photo with paper to see the crop I am suggesting]

Wish you well

Aug 11 14 04:57 pm Link