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Model

MichiganMade

Posts: 63

Los Angeles, California, US

Should I change the theme? Delete any photos? How can I better introduce myself in the 'about' section? I'm trying to update this online portfolio but I'm not sure how to make it look professional, please help.

http://cargocollective.com/KendrahHarden

Sep 21 14 01:53 pm Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

Keep number 2, 5.......and replace the others on MM. On your portfolio page, the biggest problem is number 3, where your hair completely covered the top, where you couldn't see the merch.

Sep 21 14 02:07 pm Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

A great full length standing and a quality studio headshot would be good additions to your portfolio

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140507/14/536aa82b53fb3_m.jpg
Wish all of your hand and foot were in the photo
Blasting the camera with the whites of your eyes has never been high on my list

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140507/14/536aa75e6e183_m.jpg
Pointing the elbow at the camera will shorten appearance of upper arm

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/140417/21/5350a3e88ea26_m.jpg
Your best photo
[Next time move away from what looks like in-door out-door carpeting on the wall]
Something odd about skin on forehead, above nose there is no detail in skin, but above your left eye there is detail in your skin

Sep 21 14 08:06 pm Link

Model

MichiganMade

Posts: 63

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks. I meant on my cargo portfolio though. That one has more pictures. smile

Sep 22 14 06:17 pm Link