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Model

Missy Liss

Posts: 32

Newtown, Wales, United Kingdom

Hi Guys, Iv been out of modelling for a while and recently just come back to it ... god Iv missed it so much.

Any way, Iv added a few new, recent images to my port and would love to hear what you guys think.

Please only comment on the modelling aspect not the photographer aspect.

Thanks for taking the time out to help me xxx

Nov 02 14 12:56 pm Link

Model

Amber Dawn - Indiana

Posts: 6255

Salem, Indiana, US

Checked them out ... you're a pretty girl but you don't come off as you enjoy modeling ... you look a bit bored.

Nov 02 14 01:17 pm Link

Photographer

Doug Bolton Photography

Posts: 784

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

welcome back.

One thing that leaps out at me is that your nose and your breastbone are both in the same alignment. In my experience, it looks better if they're not the same.

You have a good look. Have fun!

Nov 02 14 01:47 pm Link

Photographer

Lallure Photographic

Posts: 2086

Taylors, South Carolina, US

The number 4 image came close, but the whites of eyes are too much to camera.

The best is number 9, the avatar image.

The records image is amusing.

Nothing else really worked for me.

Nov 02 14 01:52 pm Link

Model

Missy Liss

Posts: 32

Newtown, Wales, United Kingdom

Blimey Studios wrote:
welcome back.

One thing that leaps out at me is that your nose and your breastbone are both in the same alignment. In my experience, it looks better if they're not the same.

You have a good look. Have fun!

Not sure what you mean by this. Do you mean turning your head or chest slightly?

Nov 02 14 04:03 pm Link

Model

Missy Liss

Posts: 32

Newtown, Wales, United Kingdom

Amber Dawn  -  Colorado wrote:
Checked them out ... you're a pretty girl but you don't come off as you enjoy modeling ... you look a bit bored.

I think your misunderstanding moody or emotive with boredom, but that's cool if that's how you perceive the images. wink

Nov 02 14 04:05 pm Link