October 21, 2014 7:32am Hi Pete,
good image, I love the idea. This is all about color and graphic. Great mariage between background and clothing. I think the main weakness is that it's not perfectly straigth nor symetrical. Don't get me wrong, I love off center subjects and the rule of third. But this subject, the way you treated it, It really deserves to be perfectly symetrical. Why don't you go for it. I think using a slightly longer lens would also help to make it really punch.